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Touch The Clouds
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Touch The Clouds |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TOUCH THE CLOUDS” Yesterday I climbed a mountain so high that I could reach out, and touch the clouds… They were moist, like your lips when they touch mine, and they surrounded me like you do, when I feel the tenderness of your embrace… ~~~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lips when they touch mine, and they surrounded me like you do, when I feel the tenderness of your embrace… *sigh* this one is so soft and tender penned, love it  Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* incredibly romantic.......a wonderful way to speak of her kiss and embrace.....the vision was beautiful. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is just sooooooooooooo wonderful. I love the feel of this the delicacy the imagery. Truly this is one of your best Do I love this? YES YES YES, It's absolutely wonderful As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
They were moist, like your lips when they touch mine, and they surrounded me like you do, when I feel the tenderness of your embrace… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh my...Oh my....Bill....sooo romantic! Seems the love bug is going around in Passions. Enjoyed so much, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great comparison, it showed real love and compassion, there a real lucky lady you have there my friend! Great job Bill! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great comparison, it showed real love and compassion, there a real lucky lady you have there my friend! Great job Bill! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
The lightning flashes Remind me of your whispers in the dark The fullness of the clouds Represent the love for you in my heart Oh Bill, just thought id give u a poetic response to this beautiful piece. (hugs) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) May you forever fly high over mountains into worlds of true love with your love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet Bill! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very tender poem. romantic and sweet. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...a very touching and tender poem.. Much peace within this.. Hope you are experiencing that... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
::sigh:: Very romantic BC.. love the imagery...  Pepper |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You do realize that outdoor sports shops will now be flooded by women in search of rappelling (sp) equipment after reading this piece!!?? Great job BC!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites Bill...fantastic...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - I humbly thank you for your most gracious and warm replies to this, one of my favorites... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
BILL~ I just love this...nature and passion, go so well together....very nice my friend~ Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nicely done, BC, gets right to the point..nice job..gentle smile |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Bill, Man to man...you are a very romantic guy and you do it well. This poem I'm sure is just part of the evidence. Coming from the northwest...I love this imagery. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - when I go to the mountain top, the passion is there. Thank you for reading this and your reply... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Logan - thank you for your kind words about this one. One of my favorites... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry C - I love to write, and love to write about romance. Thank you very much for your compliment. And the northwest is just beautiful, very inspiring... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is so sweet!! It's the first time I've seen love being described as a cloud. An eye-opener indeed. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, morning imagery that reeks of romance. Beautiful Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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