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Don't Have The Words
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Don't Have The Words |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“DON’T HAVE THE WORDS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When we first met, I didn’t know my closed heart would open, to release feelings, which are hidden within me… Many words we have spoken, most tender, but always with caring, and I feel, drawn to you, and all your special ways… At times I believe that you are magical, for I feel very different around you, than I have ever felt before… I can’t seem to find the words to say to you how I feel, or how precious you truly are… ~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well it sure seems to me you are saying them to her in this poem. *sigh* one very lucky lady is out there waiting for you to send these words to her then you will not need to find any others. This is so incredibly soft and tender, Bill....she cannot help but feel the gentleness within your heart. I love it. **big hugs** good luck, dear man.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your words did just fine poet sir. sincerity always speaks softly but is heard with the heart. Happy New Year to you. jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy, this is utterly utterly wonderful. It whispers so softly but echoes deep within, absolutely fabulous. Truly you are a master. Do I love this? Well, let me see, when the rain falls does it land on the thirsty earth? Does grass grow in a meadow? Does the earth turn? Yes? Then Yes I guess I must love this.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is truly beautiful, Bill. Whomever you wrote this for is very lucky.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bill, let me just say that in reading this, if a man says to me "I don't have the words" well, believe me, that's all he need say....that's enough for me. And really it is for most women, anywhere. This is lovely. 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Kathleen....if a man ever says he doesn't have the words....well...you can imagine what happens.  Good write for a very very lucky lady. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and tender, Bill! Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Bill, this is such a beautfiul declaration of breathless expression of true love! (sigh) I believe these words here are enough to tell her how you feel and the gentleness and faithfulness you're destined to share with her forever and ever and ever! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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