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Now, Who's The Fool? - for Valentine's day
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Now, Who's The Fool? - for Valentine's day |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Now, Who's The Fool? ~*By Melissa P. Monette*~  You thought I was a fool to be used as your tool for amusement and laughter as you dangled everafter before my sullen face of empty armed embrace ~ How silly! You assumed I wasn't astute to figure out that you're not so cute as you claim your glowing fame to be, seems you send more souls to misery rather than swim them in reverie. I'm tired of smooching frogs in vain who tantalize within your reign, you deepen woe, you dull the sun you imp, you cad, you sneaky one! You slight the love, and send the lust to pierce my heart with arrow's thrust, though I wail, and though I cry I need you not! This is goodbye! ~ It's time to take your final bow, jokes on you! - I've got you now in fate's defeat, where you belong you think me weak, but, now I'm strong. I'll find my prince, you wait and see! I trust myself, that sets me free I'm brave enough with faith in dreams to follow truth of Luna's beams to make a wish upon a star to find that love is not that far in the grace of rolling hills, there, I'll sip of soulmate thrills  Nyah, Nyah! ~ Cupid!  [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (01-27-2002 11:45 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) That's right, sweet friend, you will find your soulmate, and you will find true loves happiness forever as you hold your dreams close and believe in yourself! (kiss on cheek) Love will come to you, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest joy! This is sooooooo powerful yet so cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I love the images you added! (giggles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-26-2002 11:13 PM).] |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
take a chance, and kiss the frog........... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I enjoyed reading this, Melissa! You go girl! For sure you deserve the very best! Hugs, Ellie  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm with maudib, kiss the frog. Lovely poem but beware Cupid will get you for the nyah! nyah. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, YOU GO GIRL! A message full of strength and hope,a pleasure to read. Happy Valentines day to you! Your Prince is on the horizon! Peace unto you my friend, Dennis :^) |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, LOL! An awesome poem... great message, rhyming and feistiness well said, girl!  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melissa I love your attitude. It will get you far, and I hope you find your true love, "I'll sip of soulmate thrills" nice lines. floria Floria |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I stand up and applaud. Bravo! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great job Melissa. . . I'm sure that you'll find what you're looking for. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love it, Melissa. You tell him! Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Melissa, A strong woman like you will go far! You don't need no fool! True Love will come to you when you least expect it my dear. Happy early Valentines Day! RP |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Melissa.... this is wonderful.. great job alan |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
ROTFLMAO Melissa, Cupid spurned for real love. Go figure! It seems you can hardly go wrong with the plan you have in place. And by the way, it's always good to have a plan well stated...and it is! I loved this a bunch. Too funny. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, :clap::clap: Yay!!!!! LOL I love this chickie!! You tell cupid exactly where to get off  Although this year.. FINALLY I am happy.. I have years of anger directed at the lil bugger *chuckles* This was fun to read Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone I'm glad you enjoyed this.It was fun to write ~ I'm one sassy brunette, baby! Poor cupid "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hehe... next thing you'll know you have Cupid at your feet!  Loved it Melissa! Hmm, does that mean I get 1 million monopoly dollars now?  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I wonder if I can write a valentine's day poem?mmmmmm maybe I can....BRAVO!!! I think this poem is top rate and am going to take it to work so it can be enjoyed by everyone. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a great read, well, sometimes we are fools but you know what? At least we loved openly, that's the only way to do it and remember the good. This is one I will keep. Thanks, Melissa. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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