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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-01-26 08:01 PM


A little Hershey kiss

Dedicated to all carbohydrate slaves

I ate a little Hershey kiss, was very sweet and tasty
Felt yummy to my tummy
One kiss two kisses three kisses more
Ate the whole bag from the grocery store.

I ate a little 'tator chip, twas very good and crunchy
Felt yummy to my tummy
One chip, two chips three chips more
Ate the whole bag from the grocery store.

I start with a little bite, looks just right
One bites two bites three bites more
My appetite is growing out of site
Got to go back to the grocery store.

I wonder why my belt is getting tight
Was loose last week, fit just right
One notch, two, three notches more
Now I gotta go to that clothing store.

Copyright: Newell ElsworthUsher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
May 1, 2000 rev January 26, 2002

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1 posted 2002-01-26 08:09 PM


HAHAHA just like my husband..good one, made me   floria

Floria

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2 posted 2002-01-26 08:11 PM


Thank you Floria, those Hershey kisses are sure hard to resist.
-newell

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3 posted 2002-01-26 08:14 PM


Love it Newell !!  And...I'll bet ya can't eat just one!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2002-01-26 08:17 PM


hehe... so sweeeet!! so completely a treat!!!

made me grin....

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5 posted 2002-01-26 08:20 PM


Newell darling boy WONDERFUL Utterly utterly fabulous and absolutely perfect flow NO ONE does it like YOU which is just as well really because they couldn’t match up.

A deceptively simple poem that has such a lot more depth that it at first appears, very very clever write darling boy. A few lessons in this to learn…….. apart from addition

He was teaching me arithmetic
He said it was his mission
He kissed me once he kissed me twice
He said there now that’s addition
My Pa arrived upon the scene
And snorted with derision
Pa kicked that man three streets away
And said now that’s long division

Anon

Absolutely fabulous writing, and you know I love it don’t you? Mmmmmm I do
It’s utterly excellent

Can I share your hershey kisses please?


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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6 posted 2002-01-26 08:30 PM


Nancy, you know that I can't eat just one. Hershey kisses are like sweet ladies. I just can't stop with one. And so I love and love and love and hug and hug and hug. Of course I have a big bag of Hershey kisses and gladly share!

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7 posted 2002-01-26 08:30 PM


Fun poem.I love the hershy kiss on ice commercial, one of my favorites as far as TV advertising goes and hershey chocolate..mmmmm oh well I have added a few notches on my waist line too!

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8 posted 2002-01-26 08:31 PM


Hi doreen,

Glad you like sweet thingies. Hershey kisses are my favorite candies.
-newell  

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9 posted 2002-01-26 08:34 PM


Marsha, darling, I just love your arithmetic lesson. And sure, I got a new bag today. Come and let's eat 'em.
-newell

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10 posted 2002-01-26 08:37 PM


Hi ecrivan!

Glad you like 'em. And the TV ads are great. And I forgot to mention that chocolate has magnesium. Good for the heart! In more ways than one.
-newell  

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11 posted 2002-01-26 09:40 PM


i know what you mean newell..i ate two bags not too long ago...plain and with almonds haa..loved them..delicious mmmmmm...

               ~Vic

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12 posted 2002-01-26 09:47 PM


No wonder you're so darn sweet!
-newell

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13 posted 2002-01-26 09:55 PM


LOL!  Ain't it the truth, can't eat just one?     Loved it!

Michael

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14 posted 2002-01-26 09:59 PM


Thanks, Michael. Glad you liked.
-newell

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15 posted 2002-01-26 10:35 PM


This was absolutely TERRIFIC, Newell!
I couldn't stop laughing and had to keep reading it over and over!!!!!!!!LOL
I think I will laugh all night long...this is exactly the same stuff I do...and get so mad at myself for doing it!
Now, I won't keep any of that stuff in the house any more.....luckily, my husband has the same problem, so we've both agreed...
No more candy or chips or anything like that in the house...but when they give free samples of stuff at the supermarket...well!
You know how that goes!
Great job, Newell!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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16 posted 2002-01-26 10:40 PM


Thank you, Lyra. Sure seems to be a popular activity. And chocolate, per se, is good for the heart. Unsweetened dark chocolate is best. Most magnesium without a lot of sugar. But just a little, LOL... Thanks for stopping by.
-newel
  

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17 posted 2002-01-26 10:42 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo delicious and sweet, sweet friend, yep yep yep, you can never have just one! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, now you make me want to have chocolate! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Silver Streak
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18 posted 2002-01-26 10:59 PM


Thank you, Noah for you wonderfully sweet thoughts. You are always sweeter than chocolate and your words are a lot better for us, though just as habit forming.
-newell

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