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crazy4u
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0 posted 2002-01-28 01:03 AM


Oh the tact of this is elusive to me for I elude it.
Simply waiting to be touched to fly I patiently lie on the ground.
For I have felt its breath on my neck so near to me and so warm.
Its touch I simply yearn to embrace and hold on for eternity.
As it creeps so close it can’t even be seen I reach out and I push it away.
My resentment the culprit.
Oh how I long for it.



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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-28 01:09 AM


crazy4u,
The dichotomy of you emotions are clear in your words. Good write. Welcome to Passions. When Sunshine finds you you're in for a surpise. I love telling on her!

crazy4u
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2 posted 2002-01-28 02:10 PM


thank you larry C. for your comment! xoxo
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