Open Poetry #18 |
Take My Hand |
Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
Why do I feel like I have nowhere to turn Why does this feeling inside of me burn The desire I have for you is never ending But for some reason that's not the messgae I'm sending I want to be with you more and more each day But inside there is something keeping me away I do not know exactly how you feel I am not you, I don't know how you normally deal We both live our lives, each and every day But I feel like I am going crazy and can't find a way To tell you I want to be with you more and more To spend each day by your side, this shouldn't be a chore I know there are some diferences, that we must overcome Just snap your fingers and It will be done unless you just want to say goodbye Otherwise I will keep my promise and try It seems strange to me, to feel this way But I think about you more each day I want you to tell me that you will take my hand Because for once, I finally understand That I do not get everything I want That what I need inside I have now caught I want to spend my life like in a fairytale land Only with you, so please take my hand |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww reach out your hand, I'm sure he will take it! I like your rhyming pattern, nice poem |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Chrissy, The suspense of not knowing...is not fun. Hopefully it will be worth the wait. Good luck. Nice write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not everyone is capable of making their feelings known, or perhaps they are afraid to verbalize them. Then again there are those people who like to keep you guessing All we can do is say what we mean and mean what we say.... Life is a mixed bag of peanut shells! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Chrissy, Sometimes the waiting is the hardest. Good writing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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