Open Poetry #18 |
loving recklessly |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you heard my heart before i spoke and you answered it instantaneously all your reservations about loving me have melted away... i dont want to risk losing your adoration by asking too many questions but i have them-- and i know you have also... you told me i shouldnt fall in love with you though never faulted me when i did anyway... and now you ignore your advise loving recklessly and who can stop us from loving... will reality grant us a gentle release or will we beg for mercy... -dgvarner 1-25-02 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls [This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-27-2002 09:56 AM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful....... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such powerful questions fill your words, sweet friend, love will always find a way and may your loving heart be embraced by true happiness to answer all these questions and fill your heart with a smile forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
OH mercy .... OH mercy.. omg.... oh mercy baby... ok... i'm bad. Parker |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Love that perseveres even when tried to be held down...that develops when you arent looking...THAT is special!...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very sweet and beautiful! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Are we living in a parallel universe or what? You have no idea just how much this piece speaks to me...okay, maybe you do. Such depth of feeling in this one, great writing dg If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Parker's response!! Love this...I sure do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ZINSSER..thanks! NOAH..thank you! PARKER..ooh yeah...!...LOL @ you!! yes...youre bad... RODNEY..'life is what happens when youre making other plans..' thanks for reading! SOD..thank you! TRACEY..i can read your mind girlfriend...lol duncan got a hold on you eh? glad youre reading! NANCY..silly boy isnt he...lol glad you liked this one.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Is there any other way to love? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I agree that there's no other way to love - this is very well expressed, I really like your style and creative phrasing Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
begging is ok...it's my main form of foreplay! I like your style, lady! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now...I must say that it has been a few years since I experienced this love... But you have brought back many memories.. And such were the days...of loving recklessly... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EDDIE..there is...but its not near as fun... MELISSA..thanks a bunch! 'DEER..'OH baby baby PLEASE!!'..lol thanks 'DEER! JAMESMICHAEL..glad you enjoyed! MAGNUS..glad i could bring back some memories for you! thanks for reading...!! hugs, g |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
enjoyed this one... muchly Regards, sudhir |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you SUDHIR hugs, g |
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