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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-01-26 11:10 AM


Will you be mine? the question here
Your lips divine, it's written there
Too cute-or maybe Tasty Treat
I love you baby, You're so neat!

A sentiment of Sweetie Pie
Your eyes are colored like the sky
Take me, You are a precious one
Have happy days, Shine like the sun.

Hi funny face, You are so fine
A toast to you, Just one more time
Make love to me, You are so sweet
You are the one, Hear my heart beat.

Confectionary love is true
Just ninety nine cents, all for you.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-01-26 11:12 AM


Lovely sentiments for a sweet Valentine Sandra ... you've got me smilin' here. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:17 AM


*giggling* oh yes, indeed this is one sweet poem....coming up on Valentine I wonder if we will get to taste the sweetness of a kiss....Well done, Sandra...you gave me a smile. **big hugs** now where did those candy hearts get to?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-01-26 11:45 AM


Very sweet Valentine!
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4 posted 2002-01-26 11:51 AM


Just a joy to read !! Chris

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5 posted 2002-01-26 11:57 AM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautufully romantic, sweet friend, I know very soon you will find your valentine and find true happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-26 12:29 PM


HAHA this is so so sweet Catalina, gave me a chuckle at the end. As I was reading it I kept thinking of those little hearts candy with all the sayings on them. Very sweet, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

N orth Carolina Girl
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7 posted 2002-01-26 12:46 PM


catalinamoon,wonderful valentine poem!






Juanita

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8 posted 2002-01-26 02:50 PM


Hi Sandra!  This is cute and a clever idea for a write too.  I love to sit and read all those funny little things they have on those pastel candy hearts.  Found a bag one year where it probably would have been sent to 'adult forum' here. Ha!  Some joker must have been working in the candy factory...
*true story!*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-01-26 05:12 PM


Sandra,
sweets for the sweet...how delightful.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Tracey
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10 posted 2002-01-26 05:23 PM


This reminds me of those candies called “sweethearts” that I used to get in England, each with a different phrase written on them. I loved those things, they were like hard sherbet. Yummy.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Duncan
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11 posted 2002-01-26 05:36 PM


Very cool idea for a poem, Sandra.  I remember giving those little candy hearts to girls when I was in grade school.  Though, I kept all the one that said, 'cool dude' for myself!  lol  Happy Valentines Day, a couple weeks early.  
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