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kimie
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0 posted 2002-01-26 10:56 AM



Avoiding your passion my time
dwells in emptiness
I'll have to face myself
one day
Then I will know how weak I am
to your touch
But for now I'll step aside
wanting but failing to let go

© Copyright 2002 kimie - All Rights Reserved
N orth Carolina Girl
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1 posted 2002-01-26 11:00 AM


Kimie,this was so sad and touching.




Juanita

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Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:15 AM


*sigh* how very sad...The title drew me in and your words showed me the passion of your heart. My heart goes out to you...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-01-26 11:46 AM


Very sad and moving!
CD
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4 posted 2002-01-26 11:48 AM


a truly moving piece, sad, and resigned.

I like the way you write

CD

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5 posted 2002-01-26 12:02 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I pray that soon love and joy will touch your heart and you will be swimming in the beauty of passion forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our hearts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kimie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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