Open Poetry #18 |
Friday's Lovers |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Friday's Lovers This lonely world had kept them apart for way too long til they met one evening and found gravity pulling them together. Until finally they no longer felt all alone in this great big world. Time seemed to stand still as they captured some romantic moments and enjoyed the pleasure of each other. Memories were made and passion uncovered as two loving hearts shared in the magical embrace of friday's lovers. JamesLee January26 2002 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That is what Fridays are for. Or another day for that matter, when love plays a part in our memories and memories play a part in our love. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Only on Fridays, what a disappointment, that sort of love should last all week. Good Write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I agree with Kethry on this one.Nice write! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
OOOOH James, this touched me so.. Lovely write, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, it is so amazing what a Friday night can bring like any other night! (big hugggssssss) May the beauty of true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Friday night was the beginning of discovery for these two lovers and you have said it perfectly...I think this poem is a gentle but passionate masterpiece. I love it...More, James...I do hope this happened to you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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