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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-25 09:53 PM

MEADOW MAGIC

Moonbeams dance among the shadows
Eager to highlight these lovers
Ablaze with their lustful passions
Driving them to desires embrace
Obsessed with pleasing each other
Wanting this night to never end

Maddened senses out of control
Act to set intense flames alight
Granting release from burning fires
Ignited beneath blazing stars
Consumed by the MEADOW MAGIC

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-25 09:55 PM

Wonderful acrostic Karen, just beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-25 10:13 PM

you're still lingering in that meadow, eh? hmmmm.... musta been good!! hehe... sounds like fun!!

lovely writing!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-25 10:20 PM

Karen...love the acrostic...would like to try one sometime, but, in the meantime....do you have the time to show me this meadow??

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-25 10:22 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, the meadow blooms in your heart, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-25 11:02 PM

Karen...another touching romantic piece of
your mind and dreams penned for our
enjoyment....I do love this...very good lady.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-01-25 11:05 PM

A very nicely written acrostic. And there is magic to meadows! Thanks!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-01-26 10:35 AM

Lovely. Brings to mind an afternoon in a blueberry patch, MANY years ago.
Sandra

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

8 posted 2002-01-26 10:38 AM

I love this style!Very beautiful!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-01-26 10:57 AM

Karen~

If there is magic there I need to go....HUGS....you write poetry of the heart to perfection....

Lauren~
***

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-26-2002 10:57 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-01-26 11:06 AM

Strbbux....Thank you, so much...I enjoy doing this sort of thing....I like to use colors as much as I can to....I am so glad you like it. **big hugs**

doreen....*grin* now if I can only find the man to join me in this delicious meadow then watch the sparks fly. **big hugs**

Nancy....just grab your man by the arm and you can show him this meadow with all the beauties it contains. **big hugs**

Noah....you are such a treasure...I knew you would be able to see the magic this meadow has...**big hugs**

Magnus....this meadow was inspired by a picture sent to me...I am working on a Dream Weaver to go with it...and these just kept poping out...I am so glad you like it. **big hugs**

Silver Streak.... by the way you write I knew you would feel the magic...Thank you so much for your comment. It means much to me. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2002-01-26 11:11 AM

sodpossom....thank you...I had a lot of fun with this one. *grin* and it suited me to a T. **big hugs**

Lauren....all you need to do is find the magic in you and the meadow with form....with all the magic in your words the meadow is already there...now you just need someone to take to the meadow. **big hugs** I am so glad you liked this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2002-01-26 11:51 AM

Why would you want to ever leave the meadow. Of course, I know we all must, at least to come up for air...now and then. Guess we want it mostly 'then' rather than 'now.'

Fine acrostic, captivating!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

13 posted 2002-01-26 12:11 PM

Karen,thats it I want the directions to this meadow.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2002-01-26 12:15 PM

Love this never ending story in your meadow.
It just keeps getting better!

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