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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-25 09:00 PM

Meadow Soprano
By: Noah Eaton
1/25/02

Myriads of lilies fill her hair
Seducing me in her dance
Taking me into her heavenly lair
In the garden of her heart I prance

She wears leis of marigolds
Her eyes are young morning-glories
She is my hearts eternal ode
She is my lily of the valley

She shakes her hips with bracelets of stattice
She breathes innocent baby’s breath
I see my smile through her heart’s iris
She brings my happy heart to rest

She is my sweet and sexy meadow soprano
Wearing her passionate freesia perfume
She is my luscious red rose
She has made all my lovely dreams come true…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-25-2002 09:00 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-25 09:50 PM

And all put together she is one beautiful fragrant bouquet. Lovely poem Noah, very expressive. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

2 posted 2002-01-25 09:52 PM

VERY NICE! You express her so well, that I can see her. As always, awsome job. I loved this!

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-01-25 09:56 PM

lovely noah..as always..lovely images hon

hugs

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-25 10:14 PM

*sigh* beautiful...you have woven the beauties of the meadow into her perfectly. Very well done, Noah. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

5 posted 2002-01-27 11:24 AM

Oh Noah this is so romantic.  I loved it.  I also loved the imagery.  It was great, good job Noah.

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

6 posted 2002-01-27 11:27 AM

Such a romantic Noah...that's a good thing!!! never let go of your dream my friend and never stop being you!!!!

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-02 08:47 PM

awwwwwwww...this is so sweet of you to write...i love u, i will always be your sweet soprano

Your Guinevere

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-02 09:48 PM

Beautiful Noah...and Joanna loves it!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-02 11:31 PM

Noah - what a nice romantic poem to your loved one. I like it...

BC

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

10 posted 2002-02-03 12:58 PM

I loved the imagery, the fragrance, and the wonderful words you used here.An excellent job.
Peaches

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