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One Less Boy
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One Less Boy |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
One Less Boy I was there the day you were born, did I ever tell you that? I called in ‘sick’ to work and we let Jeremy stay home from school. I had asked your mother for a male a yellow, tabby and she delivered! I even helped ‘cause she was new at it and kinda scared. Your brother, JC was born first then you, then Tiny. She had some trouble with you ‘cause you were so big. So I cleaned you up for her. I was so damn happy over you, just a little yellow kitten. You’re gonna meet Tiny when you get to heaven today, And you’ll meet Abbie’s sister, you didn’t know he had a sister did you? I wish I’d told you this story along time ago, Dix. I love you. Thank you for being my cat. I’m hesitant to post this and even more so to explain it, but if you’re reading this…looks like I’ve done both. I wrote it because I told Dixie that I was going to write him something. This is actually a conversation we had on the way to heaven today. Whenever I leave the house I always say, ‘See ya later, boys and girls’. Hence, the title. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I had a nice long comment...but comp froze.. and lost it... anywhoooo...I love this poem...at first I thought it was about a child...then I got a clue and figured it out... You made this very touching and very personal. Like it.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so nice Duncan, I read part of it and started forming my response in my head, thinking it was a child. then found out it was a cat. Well I am so happy it wasnt a child, but I am also so sorry it was your cat. nice poem. floria Floria |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Duncan, I'm so sorry it was bad news...I'd really, really prayed for Dixie to be okay...I'd thought he would be. Do you think he's chasing mice there, in kitty heaven? Does his daddy need some hugs?? I've got lots to spare...and a shoulder. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you have a kind heart  I've had to go through this...it hurts. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You kept your promise well and touched me deeply at the same time ... the title's explanation was an added gift. You have my understanding and compassion. I wrote mine for a gray tiger stripe. My "Tuna Man" has a new poet friend to lay in the sunbeams with. heart-hugs Duncan jm |
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kimie Junior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 20 |
Poor kitty, now he's in kitty heaven.Sorry for your loss. Lovely poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sorry for your loss Duncan. This is a very tender heartfelt write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Now there is no doubt left about your soft heart. Because it sure ain't your mind! Shed many a tear myself over cats and dogs. Sorry for your loss and stop apologizing. A tender write by a tender man. Cool... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* okay you have earned my kisses today...I am so very impressed with this poem...it says more about you than a million words could. Thank you for deciding to share it with us...I am so glad I was blessed to read it. **big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very touching, Duncan. Thanks!  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Duncan, so sorry about this. I know it hurts. I would like to refer you to rainbowsbridge.com, its a virtual home for beloved animals who have gone away from us. Its a great place, you can even put up a memorial to your kitty. (I did for my Mia, 3 years ago)It helped me a lot. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart cries out to this tabby and to Dixie and I know right now it is always smiling down upon your boy, smiling and purring with love to have such a good owner! (big hugggssssss) This is so sad, sweet friend, we all love you so much and all our hearts are with you and Dixie! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Oh, Duncan...i'm so sorry for your Dixie....this is so tender and heartfelt. thanks for sharing... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Magnus Don't you hate it when that happens? Well, thanks for coming back and trying, again. Your comments are most appreciated. Floria Thank you for your sympathy. Sometimes, the two are much the same. Tracey Your shoulders seem to be working overtime lately. Let's keep our fingers crossed that the rest of the winter will be blessedly uneventful. Thank you, Trace. Kay Thank you for thinking so and yes, it is. Janet Marie And your response touched me, deeply. When I buried him, I told him about 'Tuna Man'. I really did. Thank you for a bright spot on that day. kimie Thank you for your response and sympathy. Nancy As always...Thank you! Startime I suppose it does. Thank you for understanding. When I was a kid, Dr. Doolittle was one of my favorite movies (the original). So I talk to animals, though so far...they haven't talked back. I'll keep trying! Newell Thank you very much. Sandra I had no idea there was such a place. Thank you so much. It does help to know others relate. Thank you, again. Noah Your response brought a smile...Thank you. amigo Thank you so much for reading and responding. It does help to share sometimes. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cowboy you made me cry and touched my heart |
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