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What I Expect
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What I Expect |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
"What I Expect" As I sit and write By the flickering flame of candle light I thought you might want to know What it is that I expect I expect to be treated like a princess Showered not in trinkets but showered in respect My thoughts to linger In your mind Causing shivers of pleasure up and down your spine When ripe green grapes You gaze upon Want, of my eyes My sustinance My sweet valley To feast and linger on I expect you to be there To laugh, love and hold To wrap your arms around me Protect me from the cold To dance with me In the moon light Or in the midst of A busy mall To stomp around in The rain And catch me when I fall To be my Knight in Shining Armor When my world has Fallen apart To fight away my demons And tear all my Fears apart I hope this isn't To tall and order I know it sounds like It's all about me But if you fill This order I'll make all your Dreams come true Times Three By Connie McDonald Copyright@2002 Jan. 24, 2002 9:45 PM |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Connie, well if that's all you want ...you should have no problems whatsoever. Good timing and rhyme. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Connie, he should take you up on that offer. I mean times three. You dont see that too often. good writing, enjoyed it. floria Floria |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oh God...i want the same thing !!! helen |
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