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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-01-25 01:50 PM

I summon thee to come here now
to hear my cry, of this I vow
through heavy cloaks of shadowed night
now is the time to make it right.

I summon thee to make amends
to stand beside who you called friend
a wind of change is blowing strong
just follow now, it won't take long.

I summon thee to show true heart
let distance not keep us apart
for in the holding of my soul
you have not ever let me go.

Tis time to cease this cruel torment
though you may be from darkness sent
to me, heaven is where you dwell
I summon thee, to deny hell.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (01-25-2002 01:52 PM).]

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

1 posted 2002-01-25 02:14 PM

Extremely strong words filled with emotion and pain. You certainly have a beautiful pen. Enjoyed and into my library.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-25 02:50 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, this is soooooo very sad, you deserve all the greatest happiness and amends and I pray that soon He will cast this spell upon you and truth and answers will replace the pain in your heart and you will find true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2002-01-25 02:53 PM

so sad but excellent penned.

((warm hugs)))
Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-01-25 03:10 PM

Do i need an update on these winds of change

enjoyed hon

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-01-25 03:18 PM

catalina, very very nicely written, and I love your lines. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-25 03:29 PM

This hit very close to home today, Sandra.....
It touched me.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-01-25 03:35 PM

Sandra,
powerful writing, it is almost a chanting spell.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2002-01-25 04:01 PM

Chanting spell indeed... haunting
enjoyed...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-25 04:05 PM

Sandra, this is superb...The flow of the
poem really puts emphasis to the feelings
and thoughts expressed...Well done...

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