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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-01-23 08:07 AM

Off My Rhyme

I find myself
in disbelief,
in reading
of the wills,
the past of words,
the new that rise
seemingly hidden
or in disguise.

I find I've tired of
trying to be
the more for you,
the more of me.
It's plain, it's plain
I finally see.

I find I've tired of
time in waste,
of loving once
without a trace
of feel returned,
that look on face.

I find myself,
yes finally true,
no need for dreaming
for wants of new.
It's been right here
in front of me.
Finally peace,
serenity.

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-23 08:11 AM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it joys me to feel the peace and hope behind all your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, just as long as we hold our dreams close we will always find solace in ourselves! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I'm so happy to again read your beautiful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-01-23 08:11 AM

Wynter,
Good for you and you said it very well. *L*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-01-23 09:02 AM

thank you Noah and Sy..your comments are well appreciated

M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-23 09:13 AM

I find myself,
yes finally true,
no need for dreaming
for wants of new.
It's been right here
in front of me.
Finally peace,
serenity.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love this Maureen!
Enjoyed this write thoroughly!
Nice to see you back here.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-01-23 09:23 AM

thank you Nancy..I am almost back...trying to adjust *s

Maureen

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-01-23 09:30 AM

Well you know i only wish for your happiness hugss and hope you fall madly in love with someone who loves you even more than you love him..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-01-23 02:26 PM

Well Queen ~V~ I doubt whether that could ever happen *s...but thanks for the thought

M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-23 10:38 PM

nakdthoughts - it's very nice to see you writing about your inner self again. Positive with spunk...

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-01-24 07:34 PM

Thank you BC..it's always nice when you stop to read *s

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-01-25 05:42 AM

can you show me where mine is? *smiles*

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

11 posted 2002-01-25 11:19 AM

Sounds like you are at a nice place in your life.Well done!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-01-25 12:07 PM

passing shadows..thank you ..if you are asking about the inner self..I am not so sure I have found mine in total yet *s

and
sodpossom..I am in a place..it's not so nice yet but will eventually be. thank you

M

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2002-01-25 04:06 PM

I like the sense of peace in this,
and the feeling that time is to be seized..

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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