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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
The warmth I felt between us was oh so sweet. I knew with you beside me my life would be complete. There was never any doubt you would always be by my side. We would always be together until one of us did die. You would never leave me for anyone else this I knew. Then all of a sudden I heard a soft mew. You jumped off the couch and across the room you ran. All for the neighbors cat they called Miss Ann.   Juanita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Adorable juanita..loved it  hugs and the cute picture~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very cute!The nerve of that cat! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What an adorable poem, Juanita... At first I thought you were writing it about Steve...and then this cat came into it! Wow...what a surprise! Really excellent writing!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita my sweetest friend, darling girl wonderful utterly utterly wonderful, YOUR writing is always superb whether you’re writing comedy or love. Why do I love your writing soooooo much I don’t know I just do it’s so refreshing so full of Joie de vivre YOU are a wonderful writer. As for this poem I was hooked convinced it was about Stevie, although I know he’s loyal, even if I do keep trying to tempt him away from hearth and home. big wicked grin Terrific poem and such a fun read Thank you darling girl for all you are continue to shine as you do so well   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo adorable, sweet friend, you always write the most lovely words that bring a smile to all our faces! I love the poem and the picture, they're both sooooooo cute! (giggles in delight) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
N Carolina, this could not be any sweeter. floria Floria |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Juanita, you're getting really sneaky with these surprise endings, sorta like a sucker punch. Loved it. Cheryl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Juanita, you get me everytime...I loved it. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Juanita, Oh, those fickle males. You think he's yours forever, and then someone wiggles her tail at him and he's gone. Nan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, those cats, they are so fickle, fickle, fickle! It's always gotta be their way! I have 4. Of course, I do win a lot...I'm just too, too stubborn to let them win all the time. but like Pilgrimage says, a shaking tail would probably leave me in last place. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,thank you so much!  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,thats the male specimen for you.  Love,mama |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,thanks I`m glad you liked it!TAKE CARE!   Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,you are just too sweet!Thanks friend  Love, Juanita |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh how fickle they can be...I love this poem...it is wonderful.  but she will come back when her tummy tells her it is time to eat then she will be all lovey dovey... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,I`m glad I gave you a smile.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,thank you I`m glad you liked it.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Cheryl,thanks I`m having so much fun writing these silly poems.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Kethry,I`m glad you enjoyed this.Thanks friend!  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Nan,thats the way males are you just can`t trust them.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
VAS,this is so true they are very fickle.I`m more partial to dogs.Thanks for reading!  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,you`re right the strays always want to come back.  Juanita |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a traitor!!! No sleeping on the bed for one night, I'd say (then get up in the middle of the night and change my mind!!) Just believe... |
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