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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-25 08:34 AM



Where were you,
When sad tears rolled down my cheeks?
You weren’t here
Were you there,
You have not been seen for weeks.
Where are you?

I’ve searched for answers in vain,
Walked the ways
Receiving only new pain
For my once hopeful efforts,
Many days,
All energy has been spent.

Missing you I’ve been crying.

For knowledge I’ve been dieing.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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1 posted 2002-01-25 10:43 AM


Gloom

If you find out where,let me know.Very nice!

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
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2 posted 2002-01-25 10:47 AM


is there any worse feeling than missing
that one...


nicely done Professor Gloom

*S*

Atov

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-25 12:38 PM


Very sad gloom, and you have expressed the sadness and sorrow, so so well. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-01-29 01:30 AM


Voices in the mist, eh? smiling here, I am drunk with innuendo! And yes, I understand the concept of haunting myself. Can't believe I "mist" this one!
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