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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-01-25 12:56 PM


You know words are not enough
when you listen to their sound
and are deafen by there of
cause there's nothing to be found

Emptiness echoes with pain
between each unspoken line
voices of the heart refrain
due to past games of the mind

All thats left are the senses
and dire hope that you will see
pass all of Love's defenses
what's left before you is me

My words may not be enough
but in time we hope for love



© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
HopeS
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1 posted 2002-01-25 01:26 AM


This was so touching Craig
I for one do think words mean so much
it conveys to the heart
the loving touch
Hope

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2 posted 2002-01-25 01:31 AM


Craig, I do understand this feeling, when the words lack the feel of full. But your words do convey so much. They are never hollow.
sodpossom
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3 posted 2002-01-25 11:52 AM


Very moving and heartfelt!
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4 posted 2002-01-25 11:56 AM


Craig~

Very emotional, and powerful...as words speak so much..peace...and hugs to you..



Lauren~


Twas not into my ears you whispered
but into my heart.
Twas not my lips you kissed,
but my soul

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 11:56 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-01-25 01:33 PM


Craig, this is AWESOME. If only words would be enough, we would all be so happy.
Sandra

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