Open Poetry #18 |
When Words Are Not Enough |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
You know words are not enough when you listen to their sound and are deafen by there of cause there's nothing to be found Emptiness echoes with pain between each unspoken line voices of the heart refrain due to past games of the mind All thats left are the senses and dire hope that you will see pass all of Love's defenses what's left before you is me My words may not be enough but in time we hope for love |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was so touching Craig I for one do think words mean so much it conveys to the heart the loving touch Hope |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Craig, I do understand this feeling, when the words lack the feel of full. But your words do convey so much. They are never hollow. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very moving and heartfelt! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Craig~ Very emotional, and powerful...as words speak so much..peace...and hugs to you.. Lauren~ Twas not into my ears you whispered but into my heart. Twas not my lips you kissed, but my soul [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 11:56 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig, this is AWESOME. If only words would be enough, we would all be so happy. Sandra |
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