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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-01-24 10:58 PM

Trees Of Life
Haiku

Shadows of beauty
suckle the branches of life
reaching for the sky

By Melissa P. Monette

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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1 posted 2002-01-24 10:59 PM

Beautiful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-24 11:00 PM

Melissa , I really love this one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

cruz
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since 2000-07-18

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Dallas,Texas USA

3 posted 2002-01-24 11:58 PM

quite vivid! i hope more people take the time to read this. awesome pic.

Balladeer

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4 posted 2002-01-25 12:43 PM

your haikus are perfection, MelissaPatootie

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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5 posted 2002-01-25 02:00 AM

Tre mendous Melissa.

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-01-25 06:16 AM

perfect Haiku Melissa. This picture reminds me of a place I used to live at....beautiful......

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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7 posted 2002-01-25 06:22 AM

Exquisite Haiku...magnificent! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-25 09:49 AM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your haikus are always so lovely and gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-01-25 09:52 AM

enjoyed this beautiful haiku very much

Charisma

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

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N.C

10 posted 2002-01-25 10:14 AM

Very beautiful write and picture.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

11 posted 2002-01-25 11:36 AM

Melissa,

Silent sentries stand
Givers of shade, fruit bearing
Wood you expect less?

Trees, an excellent subject for your delightful haiku. Well done!
Peace, Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

12 posted 2002-01-25 02:36 PM

Very delightful, Melissa. The picture just adds the finishing touch to your words. Cheryl

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