Open Poetry #18 |
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Visions |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Visions Visions come to me in dreaming dreaming whiles my time away away on horses I ride far far into cloudy heights heights take me to my loving loving man of mine mine so warm, tender, handsome handsome being a state of mind. Mind now you, this way of dreaming, dreaming could be your escape escape to ‘what’ you may ask; ask away, come what may may your dreams always, always, be visions. ©KRJ 9 September, 1999 revised, 3 January 2001 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-03-2002 11:53 AM).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
perhaps dreams are best left as dreams arthur |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love dreams and visions and this says it very well. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Dreaming is my favorite past time ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, dreaming is my favorite part of everyday, for it gives me a chance to lose myself and feel all the beauty I long to escape to! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend, this is spellbinding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I love to dream....and love poems about dreams..... this one I am going to keep! Hugs. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dreams....... Day dreams are what we wish they'd be visions. A powerful wise piece... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sunshine, I love dreams, and yours was lovely. floria |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And if I drift away in my dreams, Dreams are an escape from reality it seems. Seems to me I should sleep my life away, Away in dreamland where its all MY way! ![]() Enjoyed this one! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sis, where would we be without dreams and visions..I really like this...very gentle smile |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart I love this poem I remember it just and I still say it's wonderful. I love the flow, didn't you make me write one like this? Well, if you did it wasn't a patch on the original, and this is even better. As always darling girl tis wonderful writing ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This is a very sweet poem about dreams. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely poets...thank you SO much for taking time to read... |
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