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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-01-03 11:48 AM



Visions

Visions come to me in dreaming
dreaming whiles my time away
away on horses I ride far
far into cloudy heights
heights take me to my loving
loving man of mine
mine so warm, tender, handsome
handsome being a state of mind.
Mind now you, this way of dreaming,
dreaming could be your escape
escape to ‘what’ you may ask;
ask away, come what may
may your dreams always,
always, be visions.


©KRJ
9 September, 1999

revised, 3 January 2001



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-03-2002 11:53 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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1 posted 2002-01-03 11:52 AM


perhaps dreams are best left as dreams
arthur

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2 posted 2002-01-03 11:53 AM


*sigh* I love dreams and visions and this says it very well. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-01-03 12:11 PM


Dreaming is my favorite past time a very nice write pleasure to read
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(smiles) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, dreaming is my favorite part of everyday, for it gives me a chance to lose myself and feel all the beauty I long to escape to! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend, this is spellbinding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-03 07:33 PM


Karilea, I love to dream....and love poems about dreams.....
this one I am going to keep!
Hugs.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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6 posted 2002-01-03 07:46 PM




Dreams.......
Day dreams are what we wish they'd be visions.

A powerful wise piece...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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7 posted 2002-01-03 08:25 PM


Sunshine, I love dreams, and yours was lovely. floria
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8 posted 2002-01-03 09:12 PM


And if I drift away in my dreams,
Dreams are an escape from reality it seems.
Seems to me I should sleep my life away,
Away in dreamland where its all MY way!

Enjoyed this one!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

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9 posted 2002-01-03 09:33 PM


Ahh, Sis, where would we be without dreams and visions..I really like this...very gentle smile
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10 posted 2002-01-03 10:25 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart I love this poem I remember it just and I still say it's wonderful.

I love the flow, didn't you make me write one like this? Well, if you did it wasn't a patch on the original, and this is even better.

As always darling girl tis wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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11 posted 2002-01-04 10:53 AM


Karilea - This is a very sweet poem about dreams.
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12 posted 2002-02-02 08:07 PM



Lovely poets...thank you SO much for taking time to read...

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