Open Poetry #18 |
Visions |
Sunshine
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Visions Visions come to me in dreaming dreaming whiles my time away away on horses I ride far far into cloudy heights heights take me to my loving loving man of mine mine so warm, tender, handsome handsome being a state of mind. Mind now you, this way of dreaming, dreaming could be your escape escape to ‘what’ you may ask; ask away, come what may may your dreams always, always, be visions. ©KRJ 9 September, 1999 revised, 3 January 2001 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-03-2002 11:53 AM).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
perhaps dreams are best left as dreams arthur |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love dreams and visions and this says it very well. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Dreaming is my favorite past time a very nice write pleasure to read |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, dreaming is my favorite part of everyday, for it gives me a chance to lose myself and feel all the beauty I long to escape to! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend, this is spellbinding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I love to dream....and love poems about dreams..... this one I am going to keep! Hugs. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dreams....... Day dreams are what we wish they'd be visions. A powerful wise piece... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sunshine, I love dreams, and yours was lovely. floria |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And if I drift away in my dreams, Dreams are an escape from reality it seems. Seems to me I should sleep my life away, Away in dreamland where its all MY way! Enjoyed this one! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sis, where would we be without dreams and visions..I really like this...very gentle smile |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart I love this poem I remember it just and I still say it's wonderful. I love the flow, didn't you make me write one like this? Well, if you did it wasn't a patch on the original, and this is even better. As always darling girl tis wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - This is a very sweet poem about dreams. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely poets...thank you SO much for taking time to read... |
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