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Unexpected Love
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Unexpected Love |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding 
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Unexpected Love This love that took me by surprise When first I gazed into your eyes Has hit me hard upon my heart Where, my dear did this all start You are my rapture in the night As your love holds to me tight You hold my love, you are my dreams You’re part of me...or so it seems We dance within this fairytale Where hopes and dreams and love prevail You sweep me in your loving arms In tenderness and seas of calm Take my love, take all of me Renewed in love, once more believe In love like fire, of passions kiss Lovers dance in clouds of bliss Take my heart and hold it safe Deep within your loves embrace Keep it with you evermore Know my darling, je t’adore If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-24-2002 09:07 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh my gosh...I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It is so heartfelt and filled with such wonderful and tender love. BRAVO!!!! I am so very glad for you, Tracey. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your beautiful heart sings with heavenly love in this gorgeous piece! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever sing in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Tracey!! Sounds like a lot of love happenin' in Canada! And you sound soooo happy! This is terrific! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Beautiful...simply beautiful. Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tracey, a feisty redhead of passionate poetry and prose, your words are sweetly scented with blooming love, as magnificent as an Everlasting Rose. And the one who breathes in this loving scent must be enraptured, and on bended knees... at least that's what midnitesun sees. And Duncan agrees. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tracey--Very lovely love! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, Is it true? Regardless...fabulous right. But, I still wanna know!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i wrote words like this once upon a time... and i still write them because Love, if true, never dies.... beautiful writing, tracy!! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Tracey, I just loved this poem, so so warm and heartfelt. floria Floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Tracey, this is so gorgeous! I told you that true love was going to come to you! Remember back in the day when we were sad and had girl talk? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is wonderful, Tracey, give it to him! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is one very lucky man walking around somewhere....sigh  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautiful and full of passion, Tracey, There is absolutely nothing as beautiful as a woman in love.......except....the poetry she writes.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very enjoyable .. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
Very sweet. Makes me feel like there is a prince charming for everyone. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Tracey, this is glorious. Are you really this happy? I must request details Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the beat of love that flows over this blue page. Charisma |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You are my rapture in the night As your love holds to me tight You hold my love, you are my dreams You’re part of me...or so it seems Well, Trace...you know I love the whole poem but I think this is my favorite part. Just kind of summed it all up, you know? If you figure out where it all started, please let me know. Though, I'm honestly happy just letting it be...and enjoying it for the unexpected love it is. BTW, Kacy...yes, I do. Almost forgot, I adore jets, too! [This message has been edited by Duncan (01-25-2002 06:47 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracey, talk about once upon a magic dream ...this poem is it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Karen – you’re a doll. Your responses always give me a smile. You write romance so well, so I know that if you love this piece, then I must be on the right track with it Noah – we’re all just big romantic softies down inside, aren’t we? Thanks for the kiss Noah…your responses always make me smile too Nancy – yes, very happy. ..there is indeed romance in the air here in Canada isn’t there? Rodney – thanks for the beautiful Rodney. I sure hope all works out for you and your family Kacy – what a lovely poem from you. Thank you for that my friend. And yes, if you read down below, he does agree. He also said, he’s only on bended knees so that I can reach to kiss him!!  Martie – it is lovely indeed. Thanks so much for reading Larry – yes…it’s true…it’s true!!! Thanks for the fabulous Doreen – you are so right there Dor. True love never does die. I wish everyone could have it in their lives Floria – so glad you felt the warmth and emotion in this one. I was hoping it would translate into the written form Joanna – how right you were…yes, I do remember that. I guess we both found it huh? And isn’t it wonderful? Kathleen – I will… you know I will And thanks for the wonderfulMichael – thank you for saying so, and for the sigh…yes, I believe he’s pretty happy about it too. Lyra – thank you for that. And yes, when we can translate our love into poetry, that is a beautiful thing. It always amazes me, the beautiful words I read on this site. dg – thanks so much for that. Love is a wonderful thing…as you well know Chrissy – you know, I think there is a prince charming for everyone. It’s just that sometimes, they can be darn hard to find you know? Welcome to passions by the way. ..so nice to see new faces Sandra – yes, I’m really this happy. I’ve been lazy with keeping in touch lately, but yes, I will be writing very soon Charisma – the beat of love is such a wonderful thing. I’m so glad that you could feel it through my words Duncan – my dearest. I don’t know if we’ll ever figure where it all really started... like you, I’m happy just enjoying it. But thanks for that first push on the swings…and for coming back, even when I babbled on endlessly!!! Thank you for making me your poetry, and for giving me your heart. And yes darlin, I adore jets too!!! Kethry – ahh, that is praise indeed…to be able to know that you felt the magic in this piece. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-26-2002 10:45 AM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Tracey Your words were so filled with love and longing with such stunning imagery. I loved this one. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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