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Love within |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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In darkened night My mind it drifts To a place That within you are I float Watching you sleeping Are you dreaming ? Maybe of me or someelse, other I endevour To kiss your soft pouted lips As you sleep Peaceful As closer I get A force pulling me from within Myself Me I wonder If you know How much I doth love you Do you feel the strength? Of your love withholding my heart |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!The power of you love comes through clearly in this poem. Such passion you weave. Well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I hope he wakes it would be such a shame if he did not wake up arthur |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Very loving I imagine he is dreaming of you who wouldnt be dreaming of such a sweet person. Very nicely done |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this force is very powerful. . .and it shows here. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Such vivid imagery and passion fills these words, sweet friend, may the magic of true love forever fill you to your heart's content! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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