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The Chime Of Me
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The Chime Of Me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Chime Of Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Deep within the rhyme of me You have touched the chime of me Noted chords of melody Tinkle of foreverly~ Breezing through the all of me Moving with a certainty That with you I’ll always be Played in wind song melody~ With the windy touch of you Emotions are stirred anew Bringing feelings of brand-new Playing on the winds of you~ In gentle sway ~ heartstrings play Chiming of foreverly ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice sentiment |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Marge! Lovely! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 I just love foreverly...Absolutely wonderful reading. **big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge...to love someone foreverly How wonderful...love this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, this is so sweet. Only a very happy person in love could write this. It is utterly charming. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what a lucky lady you are!!!!! and how beautiful the rendition of your love in verse! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at you* SO...how many "foreverly" poems does this make...you've aquired quite a collection of these gems...and the best part is knowing how inspired you are  We do so enjoy your chimes chinging LOL  I'm like a broken record that you can play ... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
A beautiful expression love Marge! I like very much!Hugs Cindi |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This resonates in my heart. I love trying to capture sound in poetry... Wonderfully done, Marge! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my gosh, Marge, I kept thinking of my music box when I read this,I could hear the chimes. such lovely sentiment here. floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WayOutWalt~ Thank you so much~ Denise~ Thanks loads, gal~ StarTime~ Ahhhhh ... my foreverly goes on and on~ Love those *hugs*~ Enchantress~ Yes ... foreverly is a state of mind~ Tee-Hee .. it might even be the capitol !  Tracey~ Thank you. Within this *BIG LOVE* I've been blessed with 'happy ink'~ Doreen~ Awwwwww ... thankee, lady~ JanetMarie~ Bill and I looked at wind chimes this past weekend~ Didn't buy any ... but this one sang the words of my heart~ Cindi~ Thank you, sweetie~ Serenity~ I thank you for letting me know you heard my chime~ Floria~ Yes ... I can hear the chimes of your music box~ Thank you for hearing this one~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well ring my chimes! This just tinkled me in... and left bells on my toes! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: From now on when I hear my wind chimes, I'll think of you and "foreverly"! sweet poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Tee-Hee ... I like those 'toe bells'~ Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you~ BettyLou~ Awwwww ! That's so sweet. Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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