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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-01-24 07:08 PM


Whispers of Fear

Winds of the past make taunt
Of my weeping mind
Nightmares of past sins haunt
Never far behind
Whispers of dark fear and pain
Scar this heart to core
Ghosts I once thought slain
Stronger than before
Forgiveness is for other men
Not this weakened soul
Dare not even question when
Pity, not my goal
It’s easy to forgive another
Turn the other cheek
Yet if in self-guilt we smother
Tenderness is weak

Brian Beaudry



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1 posted 2002-01-24 07:12 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Brian, I can feel such sorrow in these words, my heart goes out to you! (big hugggssssss) There is so much I grieve too, but deep down I know as long as we continue to share our love, we will find great hope and forgiveness to our own hearts! (sigh) So sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, all our hearts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-24 07:19 PM


Oh my gosh, Brian....I know this feeling well...I find it so very easy to forgive others but every will I find myself guilty without the benefit of forgiveness. **big big hugs** You are absolutely amazing. I hope this poem is not about you for you should not have these whispers of fear haunting your life...you are too loving and forgiving to feel such pain.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-01-24 07:22 PM


brian--The honest reflection in this poem touched me.
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4 posted 2002-01-24 08:00 PM


Brian, so very much truth here, and you put it forward with much feeling. sad this is but so nicely done. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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5 posted 2002-01-24 08:11 PM


Brian, your writing always touches a place deep inside of me.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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