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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
If one could hear his strength of words, the songs that come from deep, a voice that sings of loving one in softened whispers, seep to reach into and pull you out, this heart that waits to hear as music of each verse he pens removes the doubts, the fear. If only one could be for him, return the loving gift of words that grow in comforting in arms to spirit lift, to rise him to the man he is of warmth, inviting care, if only he would see himself so special, someone rare. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Lady Ollyne! A lovely flow ... beautiful cadence and rhyme throughout. If only some could see the beauty that others see in "them" ... much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
everyone has some beauty in their soul. Some tend to believe, others to question. I have but only my words here to offer him, for I exist now on paper, or sky of blue, only. Always, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Everyone has beauty in their soul indeed, and I hope that everyone could see how special they are deep inside and love oneself as one shares their love to all the world and finds love in return! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This reads like a beautiful, warm letter of love.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Your words here were almost hypnotic ... I feel very, very "seepy"!!! Thy Lady of O hasath way with such words. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful dear Lady. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If only...James |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Yes, there are many who aren't capable of knowing what they hold inside is something to be treasured by another Thank You, Lady Ollyne Lady Kathleen, That it is...a letter of warmth for someone dear. Thanking Thee, Lady O Sir Craig, You are getting "Seepier and seepier" and sweeter too, my words having meaning for all that you do. Smiling Thanks, Lady Ollyne Chris (Sir/Lady?) Let this Lady know for sure, response to you would be more pure.. Thank you Lady Ollyne Sir JamesM, If Only, some would take the Lady's word seriously..if only Thank You, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-23-2002 02:07 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lady O...a very touchingly romantic poem of desire and wanting to comfort. Of the call to another...letting them know you are there... Will they hear the words?? |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very lovely, Lady Ollyne. Your words are like honey flowing in a garden. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Lady tis my gender that you seek? Do not fret any longer - I wilst peek. I see no snakes, no snails, or puppy dog's tails Thus the answer to you is that I am all female!! This gave me another opportunity to read your marvelous entry. Chris  (forgive my feeble try at Ye Olde English) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That all who would share this Voice of Song know how much they are appreciated, but unfortunately, they whistle that tune, and go on, not knowing the joy they left behind... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful...... u prob mean more then you know to this person you speak of |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
My Lady If Only - If Only If Only I Were With You... BC |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
One's words are often heard, not necessarily by the one they are intended for. But they are heard... Lady Ollyne thanks you *s Sir Newell, So sweet, the words of thine, in taste. Lady Ollyne Lady of the Night, Chris, This Lady wanted only to thank thee in the proper way. I beg your forgiveness, Lady Ollyne Lady Karilea, This Knight, will recognize the words I sing, in return. ~smiling her thanks, Lady Ollyne Lady Z, We know the meaning that to each is felt, for friends unconditonally, we have become. *s Thank you, Lady O Sir Charles, If Only's, may become SomeDays, perhaps... if only when reading your wonderful thoughts. Hoping the stay away is a joyful and relaxing one. Always, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-24-2002 08:01 PM).] |
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