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Charisma
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0 posted 2002-01-24 06:32 PM





Orange influence
color between dark and light
edges the horizon
merges into depth of ocean
soothe and comfort tidal waves

Charisma ~*TMP*~
24/01/02

~*Theresia~*  

© Copyright 2002 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-24 06:37 PM


A beautiful thought.
-newell

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2 posted 2002-01-24 06:40 PM






(smiles) Again your gorgeous visions make me sigh, sweet friend, I love sunsets, and I was so happy to see these kind of orange visions when I went to Oregon last summer! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-24 06:49 PM


Charisma...It is such a treat to watch the sun setting into the ocean. Very pretty!
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4 posted 2002-01-24 07:01 PM


enjoyed
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5 posted 2002-01-24 08:06 PM


SweetCharisma~
You are the mistress of beauty in Tanka-touch of pen~
BEAUTIFUL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2002-01-24 08:14 PM


ooh very gorgeous picture and disciprion!
Nice

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7 posted 2002-01-24 08:23 PM


Very very well done with such a lovely picture to go with it.....enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

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8 posted 2002-01-24 08:37 PM


Oh my gosh...this is stunning...and you paint it so brilliantly with your words. **big hugs** I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2002-01-24 10:11 PM



Wow - what great imagery!   You always pen wonderful tankas!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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