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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-01-24 05:32 PM

These warm Winter rains
sad tears that wish it true Spring
this fertile promise

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-24 05:51 PM

This is beautiful, Ellie, truly, gives a fresh feeling of the expectancy of spring.

which I for one, cannot wait for!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-24 05:59 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the spring come soon and may the rain fall with glee and happiness and wake all the flowers to the sunshine! (kiss on cheek) I love it so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-24 06:08 PM

Ellie this is so so nice.It makes me yearn for spring. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-01-24 06:43 PM

wonderful thought....like it a lot

Charisma

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-01-24 06:58 PM

enjoyed

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-01-24 07:00 PM

Very nice Haiku!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-24 07:47 PM

Wonderful Ellie.....you do these so well!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-01-24 08:19 PM

you are the best at haikus! you go girl

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-24 08:24 PM

Well said...I too wait for spring hoping that this year it will bring with it love into my life.

with Valentines Day getting so close maybe there is still time to benefit from the romance of that time of year....***big hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2002-01-24 10:18 PM

Ellie, your haikus are always a treat! This is beautifully expressed!

Usually during the Winter months, I, too long for Spring...but, we've had a warm Winter here this year - that it already seems like Spring!

Take care,
Melissa~

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