Open Poetry #18 |
A Tear For America |
DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
Sept.11/01 Hatred, Loneliness and Fears Said in just one sentance, Cried with many tears Feeling so alone and left out Having to talk louder, needing to shout The shouting's more like whispers in pain Why should anyone help me? What is it that they will gain? I guess thats what lifes about: hate and love Crashing like a plane, or flying like a dove Many will succeed knowing what to do Never understanding what it is about you Is it your looks personality or race? That keeps hatred coming at a steady pace As I'm lying here in bed, thinking the world's a mess Someone must come forward and just confess By:Tiffany |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, your loving and compassionate heart shines in this powerful emotional response to September 11th in this wonderful debut! (big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to all the families and victims of the disaster, and I pray that someday we can all embrace together for justice and truth and bring harmony at last to the world and we can see love and peace flourish, but first we must confess together! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Tiffany, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
So sad and true! An excellent poem with a magniicent message! Well one! Love, Bonnie |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
a power message this sends. We will never forget the tragedy of 9 11. Welcome to passions. Please check your e mail for a special greeting |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Yes, these are words of truth you speak. I too have wondered these thing since 9/11. The world is such a mess, I am lost in it. Great first post Tiffany, I am looking forward to reading some more of your great writing. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!!! Enjoyed your first post. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I do believe you've caught the confusion of all human beings: who to believe, who to trust, behind what skin, do we all live in? I look forward to more of your work... |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
EXCELLENT! Welcome to the forum. There are nothing but sweet people in here...well the ones I have encountered at least. LOL...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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