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DayDreamer99
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0 posted 2002-01-23 07:10 PM


Sept.11/01

Hatred, Loneliness and Fears
Said in just one sentance, Cried with many tears
Feeling so alone and left out
Having to talk louder, needing to shout
The shouting's more like whispers in pain
Why should anyone help me? What is it that they will gain?
I guess thats what lifes about: hate and love
Crashing like a plane, or flying like a dove
Many will succeed knowing what to do
Never understanding what it is about you
Is it your looks personality or race?
That keeps hatred coming at a steady pace
As I'm lying here in bed, thinking the world's a mess
Someone must come forward and just confess

By:Tiffany

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1 posted 2002-01-23 07:25 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, your loving and compassionate heart shines in this powerful emotional response to September 11th in this wonderful debut! (big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to all the families and victims of the disaster, and I pray that someday we can all embrace together for justice and truth and bring harmony at last to the world and we can see love and peace flourish, but first we must confess together! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Tiffany, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-23 07:42 PM


So sad and true! An excellent poem with a magniicent message! Well one!

Love,
Bonnie

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3 posted 2002-01-23 07:48 PM


a power message this sends. We will never forget the tragedy of 9 11. Welcome to passions. Please check your e mail for a special greeting
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4 posted 2002-01-23 08:34 PM


Yes, these are words of truth you speak.  I too have wondered these thing since 9/11.  The world is such a mess, I am lost in it.  Great first post Tiffany, I am looking forward to reading some more of your great writing.

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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5 posted 2002-01-23 08:45 PM


Welcome to Passions!!! Enjoyed your first post. Chris

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6 posted 2002-01-23 09:01 PM



Welcome to Passions.  I do believe you've caught the confusion of all human beings: who to believe, who to trust, behind what skin, do we all live in?

I look forward to more of your work...

Rodney Belcher
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7 posted 2002-01-23 09:03 PM


EXCELLENT! Welcome to the forum. There are nothing but sweet people in here...well the ones I have encountered at least. LOL...Rod

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