Open Poetry #18 |
An Angel Without Wings (Repost) |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
An angel came but he wasn't to stay How broken were our hearts that day So dearly loved But needed in heaven above Our souls were crushed He was gone all too soon So perfect in every way All too soon was he taken away Too good for this world he was needed elsewhere The sorrow and grief was just too much to bear Why him? we would ask And receive no reply As a tear trickled down from the corner of my eye A life cut so short We could not understand We wouldn't see him grow into a handsome young man Life can be so unfair Too easily we forget Just one precious chance Is all that we get An angel without wings Not a day this life brings When we don't feel that you're near And we wish you were here It just wasn't to be Although we just couldn't see Why such a tragedy came to be Sleep peacefully beautiful angel .............. * * * * One of my closest friends firstborn son was stillborn and she asked me to write something to honour his memory.It was also written for all those who have lost babies and young children. This was actually my very first post here at Passions nearly a year ago.Thank you for taking the time to read this........Sue Suetang |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
I can only imagine what it is like, my mother went through a smiliar thing when I was very young. I have no recollection of it, but your words put it in better focus |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's a lovely dedication....Sue, God bless Kathleen--(Kay) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful dedication for your friend. Children are so precious. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooo heartaching, this had me crying in tears! (kiss on cheek) My heart goes out to all parents who lose firstborns and young children, this is so sad, and my prayers are with them all! We all love you so much, sweet freind, you have such a loving and compassionate heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Beautiful poem Sue...wonderful dedication for those that have lived this nightmare(Myself included).Hugz dear friend!!!! |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
That really was very touching Sue. My oldest brother died at just a few years old, and my oldest sister died before she was one. I didn't arrive till after both had departed. It must have been so hard on my parents. Thank you for this poem. It so reached inside of me. Your friend, Roger PS: Right now I am living with the thought of my brother Donald. Beleive it or not, I am presently working with a young Donald Robicheau. He is 26, I am 55. I have never known a Donald Robicheau until now, except in my mind. It is not a very common name, but it happens to be my last name also. Life is so strange sometimes. |
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