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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-01-23 04:05 PM

twilight gleams
    in evening eyes

new moon hears
    our lover's sighs

within the night's
    silence bold

we take our love
    and thus enfold

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-01-23 04:19 PM

Poetd'.....short, precise, touching..
warm and passion filled..

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

2 posted 2002-01-23 04:24 PM

Like Oliver Twist,
Can I have some more please?

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-23 07:57 PM

I like this style from you very much!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-01-23 08:01 PM

Poet DeVine~

The night can tell us so much, I enjoyed this....

its a beautiful image....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 08:01 PM).]

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

5 posted 2002-01-23 09:34 PM

So much said with in so little words ... lovely images.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-23 09:35 PM

*sigh* sensually wonderful...this poem flowed into me leaving me with a feeling of sensual love...an absolute delight to read. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-23 10:12 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, twilight's beauty radiates from your loving heart and your gorgeous words, may loves light forever fill your heart with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2002-01-23 10:13 PM

sigh

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

9 posted 2002-01-23 10:22 PM

two poems in one, nicely written!

Write from the soul and the words will flow

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

10 posted 2002-01-23 11:52 PM

Oh, this is so cool! Great write! I love it!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

11 posted 2002-01-24 01:39 PM

Thank you..I'm in a bit of a slump right now so I'm trying new stuff....hope you don't mind being my guinea pigs?? LOL

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

12 posted 2002-01-24 08:33 PM

Very pretty, Sharon! Lovely!

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