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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-23 03:24 PM

If ever I say that I no longer can...don’t cry
For I will cry for you, as each word is said.
I cry for you even now, as my heart waits.
Tears wash away my smile, lips quivering.

Until that fateful moment, this last memory
Until my heart waves the white flag slowly.
Until my tongue dry is moistened by tears.
Until is a moment of never, such is until.

I left you sad, your heart in quandry as I
asked to not be pushed away, in emptiness.
I left you confused...thinking I was angry.
I left you wondering there, pondering until.

Until that day comes of until, love me always.
Let my love carry you above all that is.
Let my voice of song take you to the light
for I will love you deeply, and forever until..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (01-23-2002 03:34 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-01-23 03:31 PM

Magnus,
Until has to be distiled to now. Enjoyed

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-23 03:31 PM

Written from the warmth of your heart as always...lovely Barry..

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2002-01-23 03:37 PM

beautiful said. enjoyed it very much!

Charisma

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-01-23 05:20 PM

Magnus

"Until the twelth of never
and that's a long long time"

loving words from you...and Johnny Mathis above..

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-01-23 05:26 PM

enjoyed

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2002-01-23 05:27 PM

Wonderful!!!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-01-23 05:32 PM

Magnus darling boy...You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself.
this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU very well know.

That last Untill....... Oh my it is wonderful truly outstanding

I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2002-01-23 05:54 PM

leaving me speechless here...

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-23 06:43 PM

(sigh) You have such a loving and compassionate heart sweet friend, may you always share your tears with hers and forever find solace and hope in each other for happiness always! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may there never be untils and rather be always in your love for each other! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!