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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-01-23 11:32 AM

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons

and step through my mind
with glass slippers
that sink in my liquid sand

I have known your eyes
you have heard my songs
when we were bibles opened

in dark tunnels
of read only thoughts
with your brail ended fingers

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

©Dark

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-01-23 11:34 AM

enjoyed..........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-01-23 11:37 AM

humble thanks

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-01-23 11:38 AM

I have known your eyes
you have heard my songs
when we were bibles opened

in dark tunnels
of read only thoughts
with your brail ended fingers

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

Loved it all, but especially "when we were bibles opened." BEAUTIFUL.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-01-23 11:40 AM

thank you for your serene review
am pleased that you enjoyed

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-23 12:39 PM

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons

love those words..but i have to say no
cause i always have a bad hair day
when im with you

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-01-23 02:10 PM

we can mess up your hair
for hours
before
and after

thank you ms V

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-01-23 04:14 PM

DS...I like your unique way of using words...very alluring feel and a bit of sensual and mystery.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-01-23 04:16 PM

thank you Martie
it pleases me
that you enjoyed this

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-01-23 07:19 PM

Ds, good to see your sensual here. I have missed your words....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

10 posted 2002-01-23 07:45 PM

Beautifully done. I like the flow. It is definately worth another read...and another.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-01-23 07:56 PM

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons....

need anyone say more???

Lauren~

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

12 posted 2002-01-23 08:37 PM

~sigh...the scent of leather and reckless abandonment...yes..smiling here.

Sincerely,
Regina

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2002-01-24 02:04 AM

I like that bit about the charm on the horizon, reminds me of the twilight hour at sunset...It's all so innocent before the darkness falls.
What I mean is, it's hard to see at night!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-24-2002 02:17 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2002-01-24 05:55 AM

Gentle Spirit, Thank You sweet lady..

Saraphin, you grace me with your comments, thank you.

Ms Lauren, my humble bow and extended rose with thanks.

Rwood, my leather is at your disposal, please, feel free.

BluesSeranade, a whisper kiss to thy cheek
thank you .

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2004-09-06 08:41 AM

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

~*~

what a welcome.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

16 posted 2004-09-06 12:58 PM

*giggle*
ah, had to let you know, this...got me

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