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Time Doesn't Stop
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Time Doesn't Stop |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Time Doesn't Stop It's knowing when it's over And it's time to move ahead. Looking back will strain your neck and tense you with the dread. It's knowing when you've had enough the words in silence, scrawl. It's time to move ahead, the clock keeps ticking, through it all. There is no use to inch along. To shuffle, holds you back. It's knowing when the time has come, your baggage needs, must pack. It's knowing when the last is done, when firsts now you will be. It's time to move ahead this day, tomorrow, to be free. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wisdom filled write, that touches my own reality from many aspects Wynter ... very nicely penned indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it was just a few words I jotted down before going to bed last night.. I never take my own advice nor hardly ever that of others *s I just keep reminding of the worth of myself and the worthlessness of events around me...trying to climb over all the walls that rise before me. Thank you,Kit M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice, I wrote something similar to this. Time does not stop for anyone. Floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like to give a single rose when I'm especially moved by a poem, but let me show you what these words meant to me today...........   Kathleen--(Kay) |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This makes you look forward to the future. Great! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Floria..well this isn't so much about time as it is about it being time..*s to move on, forget the past, work towards my goals of being successful, as I am at the moment and begin to live again. Kathleen... you make me feel great, always thank you M J. K. Mitchell... yes, not so much about the future as it is planning each day and accomplishing one thing at a time. Thank you [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-23-2002 02:11 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - this is so very nice to see, your strength and your positive attitudes in this writing. Hope he sees this, and lets it sink in... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
**big hugs** you open your heart to us with this poem and though you jotted it down last night and think it does not affect you, you are a true poet who writes what her heart is feeling...you have planted the seeds of this advice within your heart and your muse will nourish it to grow a garden of strong, beautiful flowers. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wynter...sometimes the heart knows before anything else..it packs up and is ready. Love this poem! |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Very true and wisdom filled. Your words spoke what most are afraid to accept, maybe some will read this and............ Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
So true.. time stops for no one.. and we should definitely always keep moving. Good throught provoking write.. I need these kinds of mental pushes quite often.. Hugz, Pepper |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC ..strength and positive attitude....comes from the support of friends like you. Thank You *s Karen, if any seeds are planted, I hope we have enough rain to keep them alive *s thanks hugsss M Martie..oh, I think the heart sometimes is also the last to feel it. But at least mine recognized it in time. Glad you enjoyed my thoughts. Keith, I don't know what the "some" will do, but I know what I must do to survive.*s thank you. JamesM, Oh yes!!! back to you *s M Pepper...I need the push myself..sometimes the words do it, other times I need the hand on my back giving me a harder shove. *s thank you hugsss back to you M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for this piece, I truly needed it! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
So full of truth.Very well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows and sodpossum, thank you both again *s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes...most times..it is best for us to do just what you have said...Time to move on and do what we need ourselves...You have said it clearly and accurately... |
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