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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-01 12:47 PM

Mirrors Of Eden
By: Susan E. Allen and Noah Eaton
12/31/01

Your reflection caresses me
I can feel the heavens foreshadowing
With your sweet touch of love
A kiss that has my heart dancing

Mirror images, of my soul
I feel within your arms
Swept up in the magic
Of your captivating charms

Conducting enchantment
Driving harmony to the heartstrings
Resting in eiderdown clouds
In this phantom waltz we will be embracing

Floating on the music
Created when joined in dance
Oh the warmth of your eyes,
So lost in this romance

Singing happily in our garden of Eden
Embroidering dreams with love forevermore
Our melody resounds through time
as angels sigh, "Encore!"

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-01-2002 12:47 AM).]

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-01 12:59 PM

Hmm I think I already replied to this, but let me tell you two again that is splendid! Gorgeous! a beauty! Breaktaaking!!! Please exuse me I had a little bit too much to drink. lol. happy new yearrrrrr

RP

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-01-01 01:12 AM

Conducting enchantment
Driving harmony to the heartstrings
Resting in eiderdown clouds
In this phantom waltz we will be embracing

Floating on the music
Created when joined in dance
Oh the warmth of your eyes,
So lost in this romance

A winning combination! Happy New Year to you both.

mutington
Member

since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

3 posted 2002-01-01 03:06 AM

This stanza sang to me in it's beauty......

"..Floating on the music
Created when joined in dance
Oh the warmth of your eyes,
So lost in this romance.."

************ "OUTSTANDING!!" *************

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S MEADOWS

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-01-01 08:14 AM

A most charming duet!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-01-01 10:19 AM

Hey you two...this is most beautiful....and I LOVE the title....great job....

Happy New Year~

Greeneyes~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-01 10:54 AM

very beautiful, you two should do this more often

I am/Kathleen/

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2002-01-01 04:53 PM

Great love poem, beatiful combination.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-01 08:19 PM

Noah & SEA - ok you two romantics. This is too good, and I liked it a lot. You guys together or sumtin?

BC

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-01 08:48 PM

ENCORE!!!ENCORE!!!A brilliant masterpiece by two romantics. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-01-01 08:54 PM

thank you all very much, I had a complete blast writing with Noah, he is wonderful.

and Bill Charles!! Shame on you! I'm almost twice his age, and very married LOL No, silly, we just wrote a poem together. It was fun Noah, thank you.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2002-01-01 08:55 PM

You write beautifully together. This is a wonderful romantic piece. Will there be more from you two?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2002-01-01 09:10 PM

Way to go, you two. Nice work and I also love the title.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-01-02 09:14 AM

Wonderful combination, you two!
Sandra

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