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it is mine…alone |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I turned them all away even the ones I believed when they said, ‘unconditionally’ even my favorite cat and he doesn’t lie no one can hold my hand through this it is mine alone it is my own doing |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Duncan, this is amazing.. something to read over and over again.. because each time I felt I gained better understanding of your poetry. Sometimes words can be double-edged.. yes? Hugz, Pepper |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have a ______ ( blank) feeling to this..no words to express my thoughts clearly. M |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I found much to ponder in this piece Duncan ... a powerful verse that I can relate to my own reality, very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes we have some saying in our destiny, but sometimes we just can't make the right choices. Great reflection here, D. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey you, what’s up? Sounds very reflective, very sad. Maybe no one can hold your hand through this, but you know someone who’s gonna try. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Duncan, I can feel such tears through your words; my heart goes out to you and I know deep down someone will reach out to hold your hand and help you climb on to your destiny and surmount these obstacles! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our hearts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Duncan, you have made this reader want to reach out her hand. so much in this pice of such few words. you amaze me...... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
all I can offer is I KNOW the feeling and understand it completely. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sometimes it seems we are exactly where we want to be but the other person is looking for the door...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I am feeling sad for you Duncan, How great that you can express yourself through your words.God bless. floria Floria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Duncan, This one intrigues me so much, it is going into my library. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - strong words you write here, bravo! BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ouch....my heart hurt for you when I read this...I don't care whose doing it was..are you sure you do not want someone to hold your hand? **big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
so much said with few words. a very pondering piece, nicely written. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DUNCAN..some things..have to be experienced alone..  but dont shut yourself off from those who love you.. good luck on your journey.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I turned them all away even the ones I believed ----------- Hmm...Why do we do that? I guess if we knew the why, we'd be in a better place by now, huh? I totally understand this piece. I feel like it was written for me. Love it! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is in those times when we're alone that we get to know ourselves better. And frankly, I like who I know...most of the time. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
pep---Life, not just words, are double edged. Wouldn't you agree? Thank you for such time and thought. Maureen---Wish I had thought of that blank thing. Maybe I wouldn't have had to write this. Your response is very appreciated. Kit---Thank you so much. It's cool to be related to, though I wish it was a happier relate. walker---You know how bad my choices can be sometimes. Thanks for being my buddy, anyway. I always appreciate your words. Tracey, my heart---Yes, I knew you would. Though I don't deserve your hand, I humbly accept it. Stop laughing. I CAN be humble. Noah---Thank you, you are someone I count on...whether you know it or not. And I need that...whether I admit it or not. Who said that? Annie---I amaze you? Well, that may just have made it all worthwhile. The thought is mutual, by the way. Thank you, sincerely. Kay---I believe you do. As always your words are my satisfaction. James---Thanks for your response. That doors a tricky thing, sometimes. Floria---Thanks but don't feel sad for me. I bounce back quicker than a slingshot. Nightshade---Wow...I'm in a library. Do I get paid for that? Thank you, I mean that, just trying to be funny. Was I? BC---I'm beginning to appreciate your poetry as well. Just not on here as often as I'd like. Thank you. Startime---It's not that I don't want someone to hold it, just it's alot to ask. And I'm always grateful for hugs! Keith---I only do a few words. Thanks for pondering. I appreciate the response. dgv---You couldn't be more right! Not shut off, though...I seem to be working on that. Tenn Angel---If I knew that...I'd be in Canada. Thank you. Blues---I like who I know, also...most the time. Just wasn't one of those nights, ya know? Thank you all for responding to this poem. At the risk of being overly dramatic...it got me through the night. |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
I totally understand this. I just went through the death of my grandmoth, while in hte process of trying to get myself out of trouble...and in this I lost my fiance, because i wouldnt open up to him nad let him know how i was feeling. I regret this big time now, and would do anything to get him back. This poem totally hit home on how I was feeling...thank you. I wish Kyle could have read this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Isn't it nice to know that is is yours alone, yet you don't have to keep it to yourself? BIG HUGS. PS, I had a cat that lied. Don't ask. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you are Poet! your words speak painful truths .... one missing, though.... in tales of two, no one is the only to blame this is a wonderful piece of work but i just had to share my thoughts with you |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Duncan, I turned them all away even the ones I believed when they said, ‘unconditionally’ It's the unconditionally. To me that would put a soul into bondage. And we must always stay free! That's my take. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Reminds me of the phrase, "If you don't leave me alone, I'll find somebody who will" Always believe your cat |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan--A lot of power in these few words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Duncan, this is excellent and I have read it over several times now....yes, can probably recite it by heart. I love it... I have an allergy to cats though, but, my dog never lied. Hugs.~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well that doesn't seem very fair, but who knows? maybe there is no "unconditionally" in life...hmmm? Makes me think. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a few words with a powerful message. Do know that it is yours, but just for a moment, after that moment loved ones, and yeah even your cat are waiting to share and care. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very thought provoking and powerful!Very nice job! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well then, Duncan, I have every faith in you to fix it! But if you need a repairman, feel free to give me a call. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Duncan, a poignant reflective piece. I like it a lot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know what, looks to me like lots of hands offering to hold yours right now. I guess I'm #31. Truly, I feel the sadness in here, and the determination also. Cats are great cuddlers, give yours a hug. Peace Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Duncan, today I am going out in the sunshine, which I haven't felt for some time but I read this again, and it is such a deep message here. It reads like something I have felt, that sometimes it's impossible to seek comfort from anyone or anything b/c we feel somehow responsible. The poem is very meaningful, I'm not swingin' yet but the playground will be thawed out by spring.... hopefully...maybe in time for a repost. take care and be well. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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