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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-22 09:20 PM

As My Heart Beats With Yours
By: Noah Eaton
1/22/02

Down beneath crystal rainbows
Where we kiss beneath the sunshine canopy
Under an Arabian passion sky tinged with indigo flame
We’ll make love on this soft grass mellifluously

Strumming the bow to the fiddle of your dreams
Our hearts beating to the same drum of longing
Finally uniting together in a refrain of sensational beauty
Beyond the brim of heaven, dancing to loves beginning

In the spa of our dreams, we will bathe in jasmine oils
Licking the sweet caramel from your satiny lips slowly
Feeling your warm breath tingle my skin
Slowly caressing your velvet heart merrily

Under the milky twilight we will rest in Luna’s hammock
Blanketed in the stardust, resting on pillows of courtship
As my heart beats with yours, I can see heaven all so clear
I will always rest close to your heart, kissing you on eternity’s winds

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-22-2002 09:22 PM).]

emily
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

1 posted 2002-01-22 09:23 PM

this is so precious and loving.

Emily

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-01-22 09:26 PM

Under the milky twilight we will rest in Luna’s hammock
Oh Noah, I can picture this so clearly. Another sweet poem of love. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-22 09:30 PM

"Crystal rainbows, Luna's hammock" Noel your words are beautiful. So romantic and sweet.

Floria
"learning, always learning."

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-01-22 09:56 PM

Noah, you always have written such beauty
in your words of love...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-22 10:02 PM

You make me wish i was eighteen again ha..
i didnt know any guys who could write poetry way back than..i felt lucky if i could find one who could dance ha

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-22 10:09 PM

this is so sensually beautiful! Your discriptions are so vivid and full of life

Lovely hunny

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2002-01-22 10:12 PM

Noah,

this is sweetly beautiful, my friend. You have a very open heart and I hope and pray that you'll always stay this way.

Corinne

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-01-23 12:10 PM

You wrote this good Noah...James

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2002-01-23 12:12 PM

Noah, I love this! - it's so beautifully laced with love and the wonderful imagery that I've come to expect from you

Well expressed~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

poeticdreamer
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since 2002-01-17

Posts 46

10 posted 2002-01-23 12:24 PM

Bravo my dear poet! Lovely beyond mere words!

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

11 posted 2002-01-23 03:12 AM

Noah, this is just extraordinary!!! Simply leaves me breathless

Your talent is one for being able to express your feelings in words as lovely as those feelings themselves.. thank you so much for sharing.. I always get such a good feeling when I read your writing!!!

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-01-23 06:35 AM

Noah, so many many lines that are inspiring me this early morning...I shall return them to you one by one, as an inspired by...you are writing with such warmth.. I am enjoying all your posts.

Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

mauddib
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

13 posted 2002-01-23 05:15 PM

If I could stow away on this ship........
bliss

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2002-01-23 05:18 PM

enjoyed it a lot

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2002-01-23 09:46 PM

Noah - a'hhh, I believe I have read your secret for your special one. Charming and romantic write...

BC

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

16 posted 2002-01-24 07:45 AM

A rhapsody of a thousand nights and a night!
The beat goes on shining poet. Love and kisses.

Sincerely,
Regina

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