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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-01-22 07:23 PM

Violin Of Love

My love is like a violinist
And I the violin
With loving hands he places me
Tenderly beneath his chin

The bow is smoothly drawn across
The sleeping strings awake
Producing music soft and sweet
Of which their souls partake.

The beauty of the music
Does not come from Violin
But by the lovers hand
And his yearning soul within

He partners with the instrument
Integral to the bow
And heart and soul meld as one
As passions ever grow.

Floria

[This message has been edited by strbbux (01-22-2002 07:24 PM).]

Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2002-01-22 07:25 PM

You make beautiful music and a lovely metaphor
Very lovely poem
Liz

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2002-01-22 07:29 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words of romance compose a symphony of smiles to us all! (kiss on cheek) May he forever throb your heartstrings with joy and trust and bring eternal happiness to you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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3 posted 2002-01-22 08:17 PM

Floria...this is a beautiful way of expressing
love while using the violin as the
instrument of love itself...Very well done.

Victoria

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4 posted 2002-01-22 08:22 PM

Lovely words Floria..about four years ago i wrote one about a bow and violin..great minds think alike

~Vic

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-Ziggy

Sunshine

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5 posted 2002-01-22 08:29 PM

I cannot play, but I can certainly enjoy the sound of the violin, and the lovely words that bring it forth...

well done!

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-22 08:35 PM

Thanks to all for responding to this my second romantic poem, floria

Elizabeth, thank you so much for you kind reply. floria

Noah, thank you friend, for your sweet reply. floria

Thanks Magnus, I find the romantic poems really nice to do, this is only my second. Don't know if I will venture into any more. Yours are always lovely. floria

Thank you Victoria, would love to read that sometime, floria

Thank you sunshine.. I can't play it either but it seemed like a romantic instrument to use. floria

His Poet
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7 posted 2002-01-22 08:39 PM

Floria, this is definitely eloquent and elegant. Flows so sweetly just like a symphony. You do well with these, dear lady. Cheryl

strbbux
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8 posted 2002-01-22 08:45 PM

Thanks Cheryl, I was a little leary of it, Only my second romance topic. thanks for the input. floria

Silver Streak
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9 posted 2002-01-22 09:09 PM

Beautiful and wonderfully written, floria. Thanks for sharing it.

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-01-22 09:16 PM

Enjoyed this..James

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-01-22 09:20 PM

.....EXQUISITE.....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Nightshade

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12 posted 2002-01-22 09:21 PM

floria, this is a lovely and sensual piece of poetry. Enjoyed. Chris

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strbbux
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13 posted 2002-01-22 09:26 PM

thank you James, very much. floria

strbbux
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14 posted 2002-01-22 09:27 PM

Thank you Newell for reading and for replying, floria

Floria
"learning, always learning."

strbbux
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15 posted 2002-01-22 09:27 PM

Thank you Enchantress, floria

Floria
"learning, always learning."

strbbux
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16 posted 2002-01-22 09:28 PM

Thank you Chris for your kind reply,

Floria
"learning, always learning."

vandana

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17 posted 2002-01-23 10:52 AM

lovely poem

strbbux
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18 posted 2002-01-23 02:42 PM

Thank you Vandana,

Floria
"learning, always learning."

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