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Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2002-01-22 01:51 PM

Doubt

Doubt if you will the stars
Say they shine not above you
Illuminating, washing away the fear
Tell me you see them not
And I will believe you

Doubt Heaven and it’s entire mystic
Speak of angels drowned in sorrow
Flowers of fragrance grow never
Rainbows in mere black and white
And I shall hush to listen

Doubt time moves without remorse
Whisper to me of future's loss
That yesterday we did not love
Today you think of all but me
And I will understand

Condemn yourself and all to hell
In the pit of gloom I go too
For this my love, never doubt
Where you are is where I’ll be
And I am always here for you

Marina: revisedJan 22 2002

emily
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

1 posted 2002-01-22 01:56 PM

Marina, wow, this caught my attention, very bold writing. Love this!

Emily

[This message has been edited by emily (01-22-2002 01:56 PM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-01-22 02:09 PM

Such is the grip of love on our life and hearts, Lady. I love this! Its good to see you here.

Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2002-01-22 03:32 PM

I agree that love is supposed to be this way..but also..shouldn't there be someone there to uplift? or maybe thats what following them down is all about. Enjoyed! I can't believe this is so far down the page.

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-01-22 03:36 PM

In follwing one down, we must bring them back up. For is not that one of the tests of love?

Excellent job, I think that I'm going to go and find the original.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-01-22 04:03 PM

Doubt if you will the stars
Say they shine not above you
Illuminating, washing away the fear
Tell me you see them not
And I will believe you

Doubt Heaven and it’s entire mystic
Speak of angels drowned in sorrow
Flowers of fragrance grow never
Rainbows in mere black and white
And I shall hush to listen
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Hey Marina-girl...good to see you here...
and this...this is one of your best...
superb imagery and analogy and intensity in the depth of your emote...
this is one very cool poem!!!
love the impact of the last verse...and the devotion it speaks of.
well done Poetess girlie

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters)... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2002-01-23 02:17 AM

Marina, one of your deep thinking ones eh. Great flow and meaning, I agree one of your best.

Parker

*** sometimes the poetry is about the POEM not the POET ***

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-01-23 06:30 AM

enjoyed your words for many reasons *s

Maureen

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2002-01-23 06:41 AM

A very powerful piece Marina, beautifully composed. Such a lovely flow to these emotive sentiments, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-01-23 11:06 AM

well done my friend. . . I remember the original, and this is a fine improvement on it. . .

very deep and thought-provoking. . . you share these thoughts well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-01-23 11:12 AM

(smiles) Oh Marina, this is soooooooo beautiful, we can doubt so many things, but love is something that is always meaningful and special and is always sincere and glorious! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, I am so happy you re-posted this treasure so I could read it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

11 posted 2002-01-23 02:00 PM

Emily, thank you very much.  I hope you plan to stay here at Passions and enjoy are family.

Temptess, thank you.  It is nice to post again.

Soifra, thanks.  Yes love should work that way, I didn't go there as I thought perhaps that maybe people would just assume I would.

Midnight Romoe, Thank you very much.  Welcopme to Passions and we hope you stay awhile.

Hey Janie-girl!!!!!  How goes it???  Thank you so much as always for her wonderful and heartfelt comments.  You know I treasure them all.

James, ya eh..it's one of my thinking ones eh. Are you Canadian by any chance??

  Anyway, I gotta go take off.

Maureen, thank you and I am  very glad you did.

Kit, thank you and thank you for the terrific new smilies too!

Sven, thank you. Just thought I'd play with it a bit.

Noah, You are far to kind with your generous compliments my friend. Thank you very much.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

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