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I Think I'm Going Mad
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I Think I'm Going Mad |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I may be going crazy- My life is just a blur... I guess I finally realized That things aren't like they were. My home is in a turmoil- My business life the same... And a haunting voice keeps telling me- "You must bear all the blame." A fool I was, and I still am- To think that life could hold... Happiness for men like me, Who's hearts and minds are cold. Cold from harsh reality- Decisions we have made... When it comes to social grace- We never made the grade. I loved and then I pushed away- The very one I loved. Sometimes it seems there's no return- When from one's heart you're shoved. Some people say I'm crazy... I guess that that is bad... But the thing that really bothers me... I think I'm going mad. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Gunslinger, very good write. I enjoyed all the emotions you displayed and there's much truth in each line. Hope this is not your current dilemman. Cheryl |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Many times I feel like I'm going mad, we're in the same boat! I hope all gets better, just take one day at a time (hugs) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You aren't going mad! LOL...we won't let ya! Great write here! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ME TOO!! Ohh..I can relate to different parts of this..most of it. Well spoken frustrations, Sir. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
maybe going mad is normal and the sanity we seek is the oppisite..LOL..thanks for penning your thoughts |
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