Open Poetry #18 |
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Ice Memory |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
~Ice Memory~ How much longer will your memory haunt me? It’s still there although I’ve tried so hard to set it free There inside my soul is a small winters chill It’s a piece of your memory that remains there still Within the rest of me I’m filled with a rainbow light Love scampers through me filling me with delight But there in that dark corner of my soul I cry And I want to be free of it now I want to finally fly Why do I still hold that memory in that scarred place? Why is it still there I thought I’d removed all trace? I have a love that burns with the fiercest of flame My body is warm and my heart burns just the same But there within my soul there remains some snow And despite how high the fire the ice continues to flow I wish it wasn’t there that I could bid it farewell I want to enjoy heaven not have a piece of that hell What can I do to cut out that cold deadly memory? Why can’t I abandon it and set my soul completely free? I don’t cherish its flavour it tastes bitter and cold And I want my soul to have a warm memory to hold The rest of me is happy I’m suffused with loves light My heart is singing constantly and love shines so bright I want to cast it out to be heated with love’s fire To be warmed in every part of me with its liquid desire Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* *big hugs* Some memories just always have a way of coming back from time to time...usually it is the ones we most want to forget. I understand your feeling, Mushy and you have written them very well. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I certainly understand this one *s nice Maureen |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MizMush~ You write the fires of memory so deliciously~ 'I want to cast it out to be heated with love’s fire To be warmed in every part of me with its liquid desire' *Hugs* sister~ ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Marsha, my heart goes out to you and the tears you feel; I pray with all my heart that the happiness of true love wil, always shine in your heart and rid of that memory and replace it with endless memories of timeless joy and love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all understand how you feel and are always here for you! God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl Thank you darling girl for all that you are continue to shine as you do so well YOUR work is an inspiration to me ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl thank you so much I’m glad you liked it sometimes we have to get those memories out of there and I’m trying believe you me I am trying ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my soul thank you darling girl. YOU have always had faith in me, thank you darling sister of mine. ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you so very much, I must say that I definitely am happy 99% of me and I think perhaps it shows. That little place within me if I could just remove it I would You are always so sweet to me thank you for always being such a faithful reader of my writing. YOU are special you know ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh Marsha.. you really wrote this well!!! I know!!! and it sort of gnaws there... Some things only pass in time, dear friend.. and with all the love in your soul, you will cast this out.. soon. Hugz always, Pepper |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, how I wish I could do the same for some of my memories Marsha. You've captured a very tangible feeling that haunts many of us, I think ... an excellent write! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Memories are difficult to delete Marsha, I always say I wish I had a delete key like the pc. You did well on this, Floria |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - memories are good, memories are not so good. This poem tells it all... BC |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Marsha, My heart goes out to you. I totally understand where you are coming from with this one. I know all too well what it is like to live with a memory that just won't let go. I lived that way for a year, but mine is actually turning out to have a happy ending (I hope!). May your ghost that haunts you dissipate in the wake of the happiness and love you find in the future. Take care. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Sometimes memories are what keep us going. I enjoyed this lovely poem very much. The flow was as sweet as the content. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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