Open Poetry #18 |
Love's memories |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I wanted to love you so bad last night I was so lonely You were but a whispher away I was too proud to invite you for a kiss so instead I stayed awake thinking of you and love's memories |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully dreamy, sweet friend, I know just how you feel and I always love to just stay awake for a little while daydreaming of my dream girl rose before I go to sleep and dream of her on and on happily! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic, we all love you so much, may his whispers of love forever kiss your heart and fill you with loves joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-22-2002 08:43 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sounds like a long, sad night, walker. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmmm... well at least you'd see him in the morning! I hope you guys are happy together. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very nice piece. Filled with longing and it reminds me of being so stubborn, you didn't want to be the one to make the first move. So you both lie there awake, pretending to be asleep. Enjoyed. Cheyrl |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
walker - ahhh, the missed chances!! Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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