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A Poet's Mind
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A Poet's Mind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Poet's Mind Poetry, the words in line metered, versed to free the mind of memories piling, that manifest or futures paving, beholding quest. Dreamers dream the romance of attaching words that speak of love. Others write of woebegones, deepest sorrows, griefs and wrongs. But most of all, we write our hearts, clinging words that must impart. Gathering up, released in verse each Poet's thoughts, to read, immerse. And when digested, absorbed within, the Poet's mind, will again begin. M *another inspired poem [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-22-2002 07:44 AM).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That's us, beautifully said. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks, I was inspired by another poem here today ... as I often am. Maureen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Just lovely, so enjoyed. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you speak of the essence of a poet so gorgeously in these wonderful words! (kiss on cheek) May we all forever embrace each new day with with both our joys and tears and write them out for all to behold! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo beautifully inspiring! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed M..yes it is funny how many poems we have stored away in our minds. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SY,I was just reading and thinking how often one thinks a poem is meant for them..and in reality that is the sign of a good writer..if he can get that close and through to someone that they feel that way...but then again..we must remember a poet writes for the masses... thank you my friend for enjoying, as always, your words touch me, too. *s Maureen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is fabulous. Rhyme, the way the lines carry over to the next, meaning, context, everything, a really terrific piece. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!! You have captured the heart of a poets mind in your own unique way....We all write from our hearts and that is what I love so much about poetry. I love the way you said it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
THAT explains my "problem!" lol tis true though...as soon as you "empty" it fills again...thanks for sharing, Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Kay..thanks hugsss I never paid attention to the carry over it just happened I guess..now I need to reread my own poem and see what you meant. Karen...I am glad you had time to read and respond..today is a good day for me..for a change *s Rod...what???you have a problem??? Noooo and yes...I would think the mind stays half full at all times *s Maureen hmmm sighing once again I forgot who I was today....sorry *s M [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-22-2002 10:29 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ But most of all, we write our hearts' And that's the truth ! Lovely write, dear lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Margie...how are you doing? I can see you smiling from here *w Maureen |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
But most of all, we write our hearts, clinging words that must impart. Gathering up, released in verse each Poet's thoughts, to read, immerse. I loved the way this poem read...effortless. Though, I'm sure it was not. Truly enjoyed! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Duncan, yes..when I usually write it is effortless...only when I do a challenge must I stop and be certain of every word and count etc...thank you..I am overflowing this morning for some reason *s Maureen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully written, Wynter... I especially loved these lines Poetry, the words in line metered, versed to free the mind of memories piling, that manifest or futures paving, beholding quest. they are so true!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so cute are your gifs..where DO you find them all *s Thank you Maureen |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is really nice, since I don't know much about poetry it made me feel like maybe I could actually pull it off  Robert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmm I am sure you can pull it off *s making me laugh, Robert A... M |
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