Open Poetry #18 |
your arms of halcyon |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I thought to be with you tonight on a dance floor strewn with leaves gathered at Tara I thought to whisper words tonight of love danced noisily about but rarely spoken I thought to be myself tonight wrapped in your arms of halcyon I am there |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
To be immersed in the music To sing and dance as if no one's around. To write the words to a love song. Nice~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey you...I’m at Tara now...and where are you??...Seriously...what can I say Dunc? Beautiful,...sighing. If this is what happens when a girl falls asleep, then I think maybe I shall have to try that more often!! Just kidding...love this, and more. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You are such a romantic, I love your poem. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very calming, comforting *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, such beauty fills your words and has the heart singing with halcyon love! (big hugggsssss) May true loves happiness forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a true gem of poetic beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ahhh, romance at its finest. Sandra |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Don't mind me, my friend. I'm just sitting here sighing all over your poem! Wonderful! |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
liked this, the word caught my eye. I like interesting words. Robert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I thought to be with you tonight on a dance floor strewn with leaves gathered at Tara ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Duncan, I read this and immediately 'Tara's Theme' from "Gone With The Wind" started playing over and over in my mind.....and I am getting dizzy from waltzing with you...but don't want to stop as I am loving it so..... ~Warm hugs for this one! Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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