Open Poetry #18 |
A Smoking Stage |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
A Smoking Stage An invitation, free tickets, a visual show, tears of induced nature, swam down my face. An intro, dedication, a messaging glow, intensity of sound, delivering placid taste. An audience, instruments, a smoking stage, neighbors band grooving in full motion. An inspiration, Christian Rock, a fans gauge, teenagers intense, capturing spiritual notion. An overall success, dueling guitars, a dream singing, chilled with amazement, goosebumps of pride. An honor, true meaning, a musical lingering, awakening of senses, never again to coincide. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I just knew this would be such a beautiful poem, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) I hope you had the time of your life at that Bridge concert, this is sooooooo inspiring and lovely! We all love you so much, sweet friend, music fills your gorgeous words always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lost Dreamer, This is a truly awesome poem written about what was indeed an awesome concert. Two very different genres brought together as one. I'm glad that we had the chance to experience this together. Dawn |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lost Dreamer - Sounds like it was a truly uplifting experience. Wish I had been there. Thanks to your poem, I feel a little bit like I was!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like you had a great time! Very well expressed. I felt as though I were there! So nice to see you again, Gloria! Stay around for awhile, okay?! |
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