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WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

0 posted 2002-01-21 07:12 PM

November Cotton

Sweet mercy the fields of cotton
how forgiving the November's dawning
lush in a vision of winter's telling
Come closer still to the oak and pine
burning in the hearth's bright glow
A simple silence gathered beneath the beams
rustic grace ever so hushed in the wake
of a perfect kiss
One hundred tomorrows will come and go
though the hour will be unchanged
forever crystal in the twinkling of her eyes

Robert Joseph
©2001

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-01-21 07:24 PM

One hundred tomorrows will come and go
though the hour will be unchanged

Isn't that the truth! I enjoy your
writing so much and your title was perfect.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-21 07:45 PM

WOW!!This is incredibly beautiful...you have used such unique words to paint your vision. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-01-21 07:59 PM

                                         One hundred tomorrows will come and go
                                           though the hour will be unchanged
                                        forever crystal in the twinkling of her eyes

      This is gorgeous..i read three times...absolutely beautiful Robert.
So nice to be reading your words again..

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-01-21 08:43 PM

just lovely ~sighing
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-21 08:48 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this beacon of loves promise forever twinkle in her eyes and as soft as the cotton of your words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2002-01-21 10:03 PM

rustic grace ever so hushed in the wake
of a perfect kiss
One hundred tomorrows will come and go
though the hour will be unchanged

well it seems everyone likes these lines.

very nice write Robert.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

7 posted 2002-01-22 06:22 AM

rustic grace ever so hushed in the wake
of a perfect kiss

Perfect verse. Visually enchanting. More!
Brilliant offering dear Poet.

Sincerely,
Regina

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

8 posted 2002-01-22 07:03 PM

Generous replies...from one, and all.

Thank you, everyone.

Robert Joseph

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