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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 11:59 PM



Your beauty found
inhaling twilight.
Lips contemplative
of soft desire,
silky hair pouring
into always.
My fingers ache
to cascade you
down the falls
of passion,
into the rivers
of powerful need.
Deeper and deeper
we sink
caught in
the ebb and flow

of need~~~desire~~~want.



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dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2002-01-22 12:02 PM


much enjoyed...
great writing!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-22 12:03 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever swim in the waterfalls of passion in your heart and fulfill all your dreams with eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-22 12:13 PM


from one rose to another.....whew!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

DarkAngelChelle
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since 2001-12-06
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4 posted 2002-01-22 12:29 PM


Powerful words for a powerful piece.  Desire ... passion ... want ... need ... they certainly stir the deepest feelings within our souls.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

mutington
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since 2000-11-29
Posts 132
New Jersey, USA
5 posted 2002-01-22 01:53 AM


Excellent poem Ivy,
So nice to read your work again!

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S  MEADOWS



BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2002-01-22 02:02 AM


Loved this sinking feeling.

The ebb and flow and deeper and deeper!

*pretty*

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-01-22 03:05 AM


IvyRose~

'My fingers ache
to cascade you
down the falls
of passion,
into the rivers
of powerful need.'


What a powerfully beautiful thought~
You often write my reflection~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2002-01-22 11:14 AM


pouring into always...

I like that thought, alot *s
M

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9 posted 2002-01-22 11:27 AM


Lovely thoughts indeed, I love the image it creates....


Greeneyes~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-22-2002 11:27 AM).]

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