Open Poetry #18 |
Powerful Need |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Your beauty found inhaling twilight. Lips contemplative of soft desire, silky hair pouring into always. My fingers ache to cascade you down the falls of passion, into the rivers of powerful need. Deeper and deeper we sink caught in the ebb and flow of need~~~desire~~~want. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
much enjoyed... great writing! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever swim in the waterfalls of passion in your heart and fulfill all your dreams with eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
from one rose to another.....whew! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Powerful words for a powerful piece. Desire ... passion ... want ... need ... they certainly stir the deepest feelings within our souls. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
Excellent poem Ivy, So nice to read your work again! mutington/joyce |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved this sinking feeling. The ebb and flow and deeper and deeper! *pretty* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ 'My fingers ache to cascade you down the falls of passion, into the rivers of powerful need.' What a powerfully beautiful thought~ You often write my reflection~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
pouring into always... I like that thought, alot *s M |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely thoughts indeed, I love the image it creates.... Greeneyes~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-22-2002 11:27 AM).] |
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