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Firelight Fairytales |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Firelight Fairytales By: Noah Eaton 1/21/02 Through the long lonely winter you comfort me How you hold me down and feel your heart beat with mine In just one kiss you ignite the child within me As the bright watermelon flame burns with a passion so divine I cry, but not in sadness, but in rapture Now that I have fallen in love with you How I never thought I’d find someone so heavenly Your heart brings rainbows to the stars and spreads lilac perfume I breathe deeply between each kiss, trying to find the words To say to you, my love, but deep down I can sacrifice all but three To show you how much I love you, how you make my heart dance How you take my breath away, kissing you as the fire’s sizzling Every time I hold you, stroking your caramel hair I can hear your heart whisper, melting softly with mine in bliss And I cry, staring at a star, now knowing dreams can come true As my heart melts with yours happily, in our sexy firelight kiss [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-21-2002 10:26 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet Noah, you write of passions so strong it melts this lady's heart..... I am sure I know what it must be doing to your Joanna!! This is beautiful, sensual and very well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
such a wonderful heart you have Noah.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Nothing like love to bring out the child in us, and nothing at all like the joy that comes from that. This is entirely a heart being written on a sleeve  Noah, there should be about a thousand more just like you you know? Kathleen--(Kay) |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah- You really captured the intense feeling of love and passion in this one. Very good. Dave |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah you write so beautifully of love, this is another wonderful poem. floria |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Noah, I'd say you have an infestation of love bugs in your house and they're biting you unmercifully! Keep writing, my friend. Your words are music.... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
NOAH~ I can only sigh right now, because if I say more I will cry.....so tender, so emotional....thank you....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 11:00 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Noah you write love with such magic...that visions flow constantly...beautiful...simply beautiful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What do you think,Noah? Do fairytales ever come true? This is wonderful. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Tender and Sweet Noah..loved it hon..as always...hugss..  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah, are you sure you are only 18? You are writing with such tenderness... *s Maureen |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is so beautiful. I felt great passion in your words. Ain't nothin like it! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
How beautifully you write of love and longing. Wonderful, magical words that stir the heart. Whomever is lucky enough to capture your heart will have a treasure. Cheryl |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
baby this is so romantic! You write so beautifully, sometimes I have to remind myself that you are my age! If I could, I would bring all your fairytales to life. RP |
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