Open Poetry #18 |
My Thoughts Lead to... (duet by rwood & Larry C) |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
rwood & Larry C Thinking I was all alone on a path that lead nowhere... I thought of you The traces became vivid in familiar race of beating pulse the distinct rhythm of us It changed my gait and my mind putting a smile where a frown had been As if I could round this curve and find you there unaware how all roads still lead to you [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-21-2002 03:06 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You two "duet" wonderfully! A delicious read my friends! Enjoyed. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done Regina and Larry..very romantic ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Regina and Larry! Ooooooh Yesssss!!! Very yummy and romantic duet! Enjoyed, hugs to you both, Nancy ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Regina & Larry This was wonderful. Your words blend so very well together. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (smiles) Mmmmmmmm...such a beautiful yummy duet, sweet friend, you two paint such beautiful romance and grace in your words, this is sooooooooo wonderful! (BIG HUGGGSSSS) We all love you both so much, sweet friends, fabulous!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
serenity, Thank you so much. Victoria, Oh good...thanks. Nancy Lee, Thanks a bunch. And hugs to you too. Thanks Sue, glad you enjoyed. Noah, And grace...I didn't know. Thanks. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Thank you Larry..for being so great. So glad to share art with you. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Wish I could express my sentiments half as well. You are the one time I get tongue tied. Thank you so very much. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love the way your duets flow together so perfectly. This poem is beautiful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh this is so nice, makes me think of walking on our jogging path out here and into the woods. very nice you two. floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ rwood~ If ever a duet, this is it....this takes my breath away, and leaves me wanting more.....stunning.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A wonderful collaberation by Wood and would-be! I'M KIDDING, LARRY!!!!! You two work well together...MORE! [This message has been edited by Balladeer (01-21-2002 11:34 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OH, very nice teamwork you two! I've only written a poem with someone one time and it was a nice experience. Makes you feel wanted Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Wow, thanks tons! floria, Similar to what inspired this duet! You're good. Thanks. Lauren, Well...I thought only Regina could leave me speechless. Thank you, thank you! Balladeer, Hey, no respect...I mean disrespect taken. And I certainly hope for more. Irish Rose, Thank you and don't settle for just one! rwood, Please feel free to jump in anytime...I'm over my head here. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Another excellent collaboration. VERY, VERY well-done. ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ivy Rose, Thank so very much. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Oh, this just makes me want to sigh with ... I don't know ... contentment is the best word I can come up with (my breath and words seem to have left me with the beauty of this piece!) Each stanza flows beautifully together. What a joy to read! ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
DAChelle, See...now this is where Regina is supposed to come in! Wow, such an overwhelming response. Thank you so much. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..tremendous response..I am so thrilled with all the gracious comments. You do honor to poetry..with your appreciation. Sincerest thanks. Sorry Larry...but you just do so well. I love watching you squirm...LOL! Hugs to everyone..Peace and Poetry. Sincerely, Regina [This message has been edited by rwood (01-22-2002 07:53 AM).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
AWESOME! You guys did great on this! gave me goosy bumps! Thanks for sharing...you two should do more them! Love ya Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thanks Cindi, These are fun to do! Regina, squirming is not something I do very often. But... This has been a ton of fun. |
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