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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-01-21 02:50 PM




rwood
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Larry C


Thinking I was all alone
on a path
that lead nowhere...
I thought of you

The traces became
vivid in familiar race
of beating pulse
the distinct
rhythm of us

It changed
my gait
and my mind
putting a smile
where a frown had been

As if I could round
this curve
and find you there
unaware
how all roads
still lead to you

[This message has been edited by Larry C (01-21-2002 03:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-21 03:03 PM


You two "duet" wonderfully! A delicious read my friends! Enjoyed.
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2 posted 2002-01-21 03:08 PM


Nicely done Regina and Larry..very romantic

               ~Victoria~

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3 posted 2002-01-21 03:41 PM


Very nice Regina and Larry!
Ooooooh Yesssss!!!
Very yummy and romantic duet!
Enjoyed, hugs to you both, Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2002-01-21 04:13 PM


Regina & Larry
This was wonderful.  Your words blend so very well together.  Take care.....Sue

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5 posted 2002-01-21 05:24 PM




YAY!!! (smiles) Mmmmmmmm...such a beautiful yummy duet, sweet friend, you two paint such beautiful romance and grace in your words, this is sooooooooo wonderful! (BIG HUGGGSSSS) We all love you both so much, sweet friends, fabulous!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-21 09:27 PM


serenity,
Thank you so much.

Victoria,
Oh good...thanks.

Nancy Lee,
Thanks a bunch. And hugs to you too.

Thanks Sue, glad you enjoyed.

Noah,
And grace...I didn't know. Thanks.

rwood
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7 posted 2002-01-21 10:33 PM


Thank you Larry..for being so great. So glad to share art with you. Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2002-01-21 10:49 PM


Regina,
Wish I could express my sentiments half as well. You are the one time I get tongue tied. Thank you so very much.

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9 posted 2002-01-21 10:49 PM


*sigh* I love the way your duets flow together so perfectly. This poem is beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-01-21 10:50 PM


Oh this is so nice, makes me think of walking on our jogging path out here and into the woods. very nice you two. floria
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11 posted 2002-01-21 10:56 PM


Larry~ rwood~

If ever a duet, this is it....this takes my breath away, and leaves me wanting more.....stunning....


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 10:56 PM).]

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12 posted 2002-01-21 11:04 PM


A wonderful collaberation by Wood and would-be!

I'M KIDDING, LARRY!!!!!

You two work well together...MORE!  

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (01-21-2002 11:34 PM).]

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13 posted 2002-01-21 11:20 PM


OH, very nice teamwork you two!

I've only written a poem with someone one time
and it was a nice experience.  Makes you feel wanted

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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14 posted 2002-01-22 12:04 PM


Karen,
Wow, thanks tons!

floria,
Similar to what inspired this duet! You're good. Thanks.

Lauren,
Well...I thought only Regina could leave me speechless. Thank you, thank you!

Balladeer,
Hey, no respect...I mean disrespect taken. And I certainly hope for more.

Irish Rose,
Thank you and don't settle for just one!

rwood,
Please feel free to jump in anytime...I'm over my head here.

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15 posted 2002-01-22 12:34 PM


Another excellent collaboration. VERY, VERY well-done.  ***Ivy Rose
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16 posted 2002-01-22 12:40 PM


Ivy Rose,
Thank so very much.

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17 posted 2002-01-22 12:51 PM


Oh, this just makes me want to sigh with ... I don't know ... contentment is the best word I can come up with (my breath and words seem to have left me with the beauty of this piece!)  Each stanza flows beautifully together.  What a joy to read!

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

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18 posted 2002-01-22 01:04 AM


DAChelle,
See...now this is where Regina is supposed to come in! Wow, such an overwhelming response. Thank you so much.

rwood
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19 posted 2002-01-22 07:25 AM


Yes..tremendous response..I am so thrilled with all the gracious comments. You do honor to poetry..with your appreciation. Sincerest thanks.

Sorry Larry...but you just do so well.  
I love watching you squirm...LOL!

Hugs to everyone..Peace and Poetry.

Sincerely,
Regina

[This message has been edited by rwood (01-22-2002 07:53 AM).]

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20 posted 2002-01-22 10:40 AM


AWESOME! You guys did great on this!  gave me goosy bumps!  Thanks for sharing...you two should do more them!
Love ya
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Larry C
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21 posted 2002-01-22 02:26 PM


Thanks Cindi, These are fun to do!

Regina, squirming is not something I do very often. But... This has been a ton of fun.

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