Open Poetry #18 |
Spirit Flute Unending |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
My Sweet One, hear the sultry strains of my spirit flute... mellow notes floating ~~~~on sound waves right into your heart. My love is a new melody sung with unending yearning. O', Fair One, I play the notes of my soul. They are yours to keep forever. Forever is too short, infinity ~~~~not long enough. My spirit flute will breath the same love song...unending. It will be an unseen hand to caress your yearning spirit, ~~~~an eternal arm to rest upon the shoulder ~~~~of your need. Hear the sensous strains of the spirit flute, My Love... They are carried within the notes of my own heart, ~~~~~~my own soul. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ivy...this poem is fantastic....I could hear the echoe of a flute carried on the winds. Stunning. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Forever is too short, infinity ~~~~not long enough. What a great line! A very well played tune, Ivy Rose. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love a sound of the flute! Wow, Ivy, you have captured my attention with this one! 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautifully melodic verse Ivy Rose ... lovely sentiments indeed, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oooooohhhhhh....the Love Flute...I love it, the beauty of spiritual love fills your words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) The magic of courtship strums in your melody of your heart, sweet friend, soooooooo romantic! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ This is as lovely as the true 'song of the wood' ... Thanks so much for a lovely read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh how I love the flute. lovely poem. floria |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ivy, you have captured the song of the flute in this romantic melody. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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